I'm going to be honest here, one thing I don't like is how dark the story gets whenever the villains show up and how there can be some infighting between the children.

Every time the villains show up, I just want them to get their comeuppance right away due to how far they go past the moral event horizon. It's always having them be smug, try to break the heroes' will, and then run away. It's villains like them that I want to see absolutely killed right away.

I think this story gets too serious at points.

lol i accidentally read the stories out of order...which means I just spoiled the story for myself. lol. anyway please continue to right more! I really wanna see how what happens to Lyla. she really deserves redemption.

love to see mika find her parents.

Jeez! The darkness just won't leave poor Pat alone! Glad she was able to overcome it this time.

Yep! Saw that coming! I knew Hikari was a new Princess of Heart!

hope pith and angel escape.

When Patria went to see the Cornerstone of Light, I was expecting more of a Roxas’ first time in Castle Oblivion scenario where she collapses. I definitely was not expecting it to break.

Keyblade armor huh? Well that tells me that this entity is or was a Keyblade wielder. And with the idea that he may be targeting Oukoku's lineage, I'm wondering if the idea I had on his identity back when the original Final Stand stinger was posted actually has merit.

Ah, Pith and Angel just get closer and closer. Won't be long before the curse of darkness in Oni's lineage is lifted.

Well... the Cornerstone idea backfired horrendously.

After all that, the main thing I can think about is that I hope that Angel is okay.

Man! That was rough!

To think mystery entity(I'm surprised they refer to him has a man/person since I always got more of an entity vibe from him, and for all they know this guy could be more monster than man) was that close to actually claiming Patria for himself, so close that the darkness it left an apparently permanent mark on her.

And now they know the truth, and are now doing something about it. Hopefully, they'll be able to prevent this from happening again.

Interesting how you made the miscarriage child Jun. Makes me wonder what could've been had she lived.

Ugh! Brim, your father is right! That was completely uncalled for! Were you TRYING to start a fight here? Because that's what calling your own ally, who has emotional issues, a psychopath WILL do, and it's NOT gonna help anyone! Also put yourself in her shoes for a moment. How would you feel if it was Blaze who was kidnapped? You'd be just as stressed, possibly even irrational, as she is! And Pat, I know your concerned about your brother, but lashing out like that is not doing you any favors. If anything you're just proving his point. And neither is judging Angel when 1) she didn't choose to be Xehanort's daughter, and 2) none of her actions against you have been her own, you should know that, and 3) surely you know that freeing her could indeed help you find your brother much faster, right?! Idiots! The both of them!

I'm not gonna lie, I'm getting very nervous to what's gonna happen next, and not in a good way.

Hmmm...sounds to me like Patria is getting closer and closer to giving in to the Darkness entirely. Will she lose it? or will she be able to control her power? only time, and Kris, will tell. Amazing work! can't wait for the nect installment!

Ooo! I’ll go back and read your KH4 story first but I’m intrigued by the concept of this story too. Do you like guessing and speculating the future of the games too?:D

Bah...stupid phone inserting its own words. that was supposed to say the last THREE chapters, not two...

Two words, KV: HELL YEAH! The last two chapters were insane! Seeing the lengths that Vanitas will go to to protect Vanette, makes me think of my own two girls, and how I would feel about them being with me in a similar situation. And inserting Xion into the Monsters, Inc. world? Genius! Xion's reaction to her kids being scared by the monsters was exactly what I would expect from someone like her. For someone who was meant to only be a replica of Sora(even though she ended up looking like Kairi, go figure that), she certainly has proven herself to be more than that, on more than one occasion. Can't wait to see what challenges she faces next! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Based on footnote 7:

"Sully, with a mighty throw, yeeted the lizard monster out of the door."

HELP ME I CAN'T STOP CHUCKLING