Nice work with this story. This is a really unique idea for a story. You did a great job with keeping everyone in character.

Yemma's explanation to Cell makes a lot of sense. The ending is most fitting for Cell. In a way the real Hell will be him having to realize for all eternity that he is not perfect.

Good work writing this story.

8D I really, really liked this. It's very well written and descriptive, eloquent, even. You write Cell very well. The only thing I have to complain about is that it is a one-shot. w;

Not bad.

A few grammar and punctuation errors. But this is a really good and thoughtful topic.

I especially liked King Yemma's comeback. A flawed Perfection. Nice D

A very interesting take on Cell's POV, and probably the only believeable one to boot. Cell's body count was high, but Cell will be pretty surprised when he finds out about the billions Freeza killed.

Oo I love your stories..-; I gotta write a story too.

A deep, complex look into the mind of Cell. 10 out of 10. Original, thoughtful, disturbing, and well-written.

...Wow... For one thing, the detail in this is fantastic, and you have a very mature writing style. I'm most impressed.

As for the explanation unto Cell's 'Flawed Perfection'-excellent! It's almost too simple to figure out, yet it answers everything perfectly-why Cell was distracted, and defeated, even by the least likely of heroes.

Good work! I look forward to seeing more from you!

~KASH~

a flawed perfection, i would've never thought of that! it sorta makes sense.

I'm utterly baffled that I've managed to, in my random samplings of the day's new fanfiction, stumble upon your little jewel; I tend to find myself trudging through various flavors of mud, but your fanfic is flavored in a far more savory fashion. The almost total lack of any sort of structural error is just fantastic, and this is nicely complimented by the elevated, diverse diction (it fits Cell's egotistical attitude quite well). You've managed to use this in your favor and have thus, somehow, written a captivating, entertaining, FIRST person narrative. The psychological dabblings are just wonderful, the refinement of the characters is just wonderful. Even in its brevity, the story is quite fulfilling. As a whole, this fanfic is stunning.

I don't think it I need to say this, but it's good.