Things will certainly be interesting...

I liked how you wrote Sly Moore fighting the Jedi and training under Sidious. I also liked how you wrote the scene between Gunray and Plagueis. Please update soon thanks.

Well Done! Richly detailed but not bogged down by it. Intelligent dialogue.

I liked how you wrote Sly Moore and Sidious talking about Darth Ruin in this chapter. I also liked how you wrote Sly trying to trick Jocasta Nu and then knocking her out. Please update soon thanks and I liked how you wrote Dooku's speech for the Holonet. Please update soon thanks.

When will the next chapter.

I wonder when Plagueis will discover Anakin is his greatest creation and what his reaction will be

Good chapter. Sidious really is a spiteful bastard, isn't he? It would have served him right if Moore had successfully ambushed him.

Hi, I just met you~
And this is crazy~
But I want to be your apprentice~
So call me maybe~

No offense, since you rendered it with better writing than the latter-day EU could hope to have, but this chapter really shows off the absurdity of the Sith!Vergere retcon timeline. She shows up, pledges herself to the Sith, and is promptly punted off to Sekot. I don't know about you, but if I pledged my soul to evil and only got a few weeks of training before being assigned to a post off the edge of the known universe, I'd demand a refund. :P

Good story. I just found that part hilarious.

Thank you! Keep up the good work!

Great story/

Please let us see their reaction to the yuuzhan vong!

The Vong, huh? Guess they're still kicking.

Vergere was a nice touch, I feel that she goes ignored among most of the EU lineup of characters and you displayed a younger Vergere good; one whose vulnerability became exploited by the Sith and later the Vong.

Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for Grievous.

Keep up the good work!

the vong? most interesting, plageuis and sidious need to deal with them quick, or be potentially caught up in a 3-way war, or be forced to ally wiith the jedi to face the yuuzhan vong

I enjoyed reading this chapter and please write more thanks and I liked how you wrote the scenes between Vergere and the Sith. Will Dooku train Grievous in lightsaber combat?

Thank you so much for including Grievous! He is my favorite character! It is so cool to see him and Darth Plagueis interact and I hope to see more of him!