Only three chapters?

I find myself sad beyond reason.

why did you left this masterpiece hanging! it's even worse than if it had been a bad story!

How heavy the crown Hakuno wears as he learns more about expanding, building and up-keeping his city, and the bit about Nero reminding her master how she bankrupted Rome was a nice touch to that discussion.

Nero allows all of her knowledge, but one book which she has deemed private to fill their library...I have some suspicions to its contents, but lol.

Their first major invasion has gone well so far, but somehow I doubt the battle ahead will be a cake walk for them...these things usually aren't.

Quite a bit of rules for this new war, but interesting and yet worrying if say someone was to take Nero or Tamamo hostage they could force her to hand over their scepter.

Unsurprisingly Nero and Tamamo begin butting heads over naming the city, but it caused them to both loose XD.

They barely have time to establish themselves and they already have enemies encroaching upon their territory.

A city of spiders shall be their first conquest, but I wonder who does it belong to.

Interesting, an all out war involving servants with masters commanding entire armies of them. I imagine Leo, assuming he is involved, will be among the more problematic masters to deal with given his background. Presumably Shinji will be a issue, maybe not too big but a real pain where he’ll likely make alliances with other masters before inevitably backstabbing them.

I’ll be checking the other chapters next, but I am intrigued by this story.

hola me gusta tu historia ya me he pasado x ella dos veces muy buena actualizalo pronto x favor aver km le va a hakuno en su harem q se ha metido jeje incluyendo supongo a ella misma las dos tamamos y nero x ahora bueno nos hablamos cuidate dtb

Epic! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

this seems really interesting. can't wait for the next chapter.

Before I start reading this fic, and before you continue writing, I'm going to give you a piece of advice. And listen well, because this is very important: When Nero says 'sousha' she's not actually saying 'Praetor.' In fact, Nero has never actually called Hakuno Praetor. 'sousha' is actually 'Maestro.' I encourage you to replace Praetor with Maestro post-haste. your fic will be better for it, and you will come to understand Nero better as well.

'Praetor' is the result of Aniplex America wanting to put Latin everywhere, even if it was incorrect, had nothing to do with the content beyond 'Nero is Roman, so let's have her call him Praetor even though doing so will cause a ton of actual clever points in her dialogue to get needlessly lost in translation.' It's just plain wrong. In Last Encore, it was dubbed as 'Performer,' which is still more accurate than 'Praetor.'

I understand if you'd prefer to keep using Praetor out of familiarity, however before you decide offhand to do that, I encourage you to watch through the EXTRA games and pay attention to Nero's comparisons: Specifically, the ones she makes comparing herself to a musical instrument. After that, you likely won't hesitate to replace all instances of 'Praetor' with 'Maestro.' I look forward to seeing more of this fic. And if you don't want to take my word for it, you can go to Beast's Lair and ask someone more fluent in Japanese than I am. They'll say the same.

This story is looking amazing so far and it's quite interesting, although it's basically Civ mixed with fate it works. A unique idea for a servant would be Dead Face Hakuno, just to be more mind fucky and he could be an assassin like Li shuwen. Cause female Hakuno could get one of those servant mystery box cores and then pick to get a random servant and get Dead Face cause he's made of her and they both had Nero as a servant from a different timeline. (If you don't understand anything I just said watch the fate/extra last encore anime and you'll get it, Dead Face is a really awesome idea)

please update very interesting

OH interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good job on the start. Whoa two hakuno

well done. cant wait for more

Rather enjoying this as an idea, definitely looking forward to seeing more of it. Though, that moment when Nero just asked "Alice?" hurt so much more than I expected it to. I hated that week so much.