Nice story but where's the rest?

i am liking this story. It seems to have alot of promise. a little concerned that you made the Covenant super Powerful, but thats ok. was wondering if you could use some OCs cor some characters?

If this is the Covenant, it's very unlikely they would be so close to the UNSC. If it's the Wraith, they wouldn't fire on food with darts, they would try to beam them into the buffer.

That poor vice admiral... who names their kid like that, with a last name like that... too cruel...

very good first chapter

please update

Nice update

since weir is in charge that means this is before the Daedalus got the Asgard retrofit or pre unending 304 eh Alternate realities are about to become reality for the UNSC mwahahaha

Nice chapters but there is one problem the forerunners became extinct 100,000 years ago not 10000 years

Good chapter, though I think it would’ve been better if you showed Sheppard’s team meeting the UNSC personell and escaping with them. Maybe you should include that in the next chapter as a flashback. You could even start it with Sheppard’s team debriefing Weir on their escape. Anyway, even if the chapter is a bit short, it’s still pretty good, but again, I think it would’ve been better if you included their meeting and escape.

Good chapter title would be Shock and Huh? Shock at they found the Covenant and Huh? At what Shepherd just said about them being from Earth. If it sucks then i got nothing else
Update soon.

is there going to be like halo wars 2 content right.

Nice

Really good story plz write more!

The admiral's name is beyond annoying. It's distracting me from the rest of the story.