I’m excited for any future plans that you may have as this is already an interesting idea, but I’m curious. Are you planning on having Bell with anyone or are you going have him fly solo?

So is there a rewrite somewhere?

My Hero Academia and Honkai Impact the 3rd
Deku x Kiana
Fire Emblem Fates and Rising of the Shield Hero
Naofumi x Female Corrin

So just found this and you are the first I have seen to use the secret ending so I do wannt to see more

Reading through this, I’m not going to lie it’s really well paced in my opinion for where it is, fight scenes and transitions are decent too compared to most of what I’ve seen.

One of my gripes with this fanfic is the transition between Bell and goal of getting a his stable job and entering he dungeon. Wouldn’t there be some exposition or dialogue explaining just the bare minimum of what the dungeon is?

There’s also the curse on the great ones and how great ones fit into danmachi, gods I can see getting enough insight to get affected, but humans who would have next to zero contact without going insane? Is it because of the falna protecting them that they can survive and fight equivalently?

There’s also the fact that bell went through Bloodborne 6 total times and from the early chapters felt a bit unhinged with a tang of angst, which later devolved into a semi serious hunter exploring the world. Except there’s no major exploration before the scene with The Hostress. I would assume bell would be under some sense of euphoria and explore away to his hearts content.

Up until he went into the dungeon anyways.

Mind you, I’ve never played Bloodborne and I might get a few things wrong so take my questions with more than a tablespoon of salt.

Welcome back, and I'm happy to see that you're alive!

I'm looking forward to the re-work.

I don't like what you did to Plain Doll, shrinking and humanizing her and making her helpless. She should be as she is (what she was in chapter 1 before she became a brownie). As with Vein Code, I would prefer without it so as not to overdo it but you can do whatever you like.

Oh cool thanks man, been keeping an eye on this.

more!

I very much enjoyed the work you have posted thus far. If you have the time, could you please continue your work?

Taking a break is nice and dandy but this is getting a little excessive to me

good for an impulse... i hope to see you writing it again :)

Man, this seems good, please continue it..

(huh... is that code vein?)

If your still interested in this story then I have an idea that you might like if only to help with brainstorming.