This story was amazing, you really nailed the feelings with this one, both the characters and mime :D

This was a cute story, I can't really understand Qui-Gon's devotion to the Force easily but it was a very interesting perspective to look at.

You really nailed it.

This was really painful to read - the situation is so unfair to Obi-Wan! - but you really succeeded in bringing across the lesson. If Anakin remembers it, Darth Sidious may destroy the Jedi Order, but Anakin won't fall.

I would be really interested in a sequel; it seemed you had some ideas about what Obi-Wan's future path would be like?

Ouch. I think I might cry. Very, very good. But geez, did it have to be so sad? Yes, I know, it did. I have a love/hate relationship with angst and you nailed it. Great job!

Wow. I would love to see this continued but it stands on its own. Excellent!

This is heartbeaking and a beautiful tribute to Obi Wan (my favourite Star Wars character). In the end, it is the student who gives a final lesson to the Master. Poor Qui-Gon, it would seem that escaping death did not give him enlightement, it was Obi-Wan who reached it, only to be sent to the Agri-Corps...Foolishly I wonder what awaits Obi-Wan now or even Qui-Gon. It was a brilliantly written one-shot that really had my heart brealing.

Augh nooooooo. *runs for a box of tissues* How could the council do this? Not letting their brightest light become a knight... that's just petty. YOU HEAR THAT YODA. THIS IS NOT "THE WILL OF THE FORCE". Argh. Obi-Wan deserves to be a Jedi more than those stuffy *****s on the council.
The pain my poor Obi is going through... :'(

Thanks so much for writing! I loved your story (don't let my anger and frustration displayed above fool you... it was a really good fic.) :) 3

I want to kick Qui-Gon’s butt along with the rest of the council’s:

Wow I did not expect to be crying over Obi this morning but here we are. This is really beautifully written and I can't wait for the next chapter, thank you for sharing your writing!

Wow. Heartfelt and amazing. Obi-Wan Kenobi is my favorite and you described exactly why.