I'm so freaking excited this story makes me so happy and Finn is my favorite and the Clones deserved so much better and I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

AAAAAAHHHHH! YOU AREN'T THE ONLY ONE CRYING! My gosh this hurt in the best way possible!

THIS WAS SO FREAKING CUTE! I JUST ABOUT DIED! MY HEART! Brother.

Seeing all the Mando'a is fantastic, I grin every time. I try to get an idea of what they're saying, and yet I'm always surprised by the translations. Wolf Pack roughhousing had me giggling, and I loved how they patiently answered their curious vok'ika's questions. The part where he helps Zeroes was great, and seeing the change was fantastic... oh God... Oh no. I truly, truly hope I am wrong about this...

My favourite is the scene with Keeli- Keeli was one of my favourites, even if we didn't see much of him, and I absolutely loved his design. Seeing him again in your story made me positively giddy! The way you did that scene, the way you described things, and the emotions that came with it, I read it twice over it was so good. Hurt like hell, but he's with his brothers now. AND THEIR LITTLE BROTHER BEING BRAVE AND HELPFUL AND SEFLESS! I love the way you've written him. When/if we get to the part where he defects, I look forward to seeing how everyone reacts. Oh man! This is one of the best, best, BEST, Star Wars story I have read so far! It is just so perfect. Well done!

N I C E

This is amazing, keep it up Vod
-PFC David Willis

hmm, so he's only able to do that when a clone's in too deep, and it seems to only really be for when and how he died.

Since Finn is definitely force sensitive I feel like that has something to do with why he can see them. I have an idea of who the man in the brown robe is from his dream but I'll wait for you to tell me.

MOAR

OHHHHHH I'm so glad you updated this fic! It's so good, and its a great read for when I'm waiting for Dominoes XD
take you time with the writing, do you best and keep being amazing

well this is intresting..

Oh I forgot that Kix is supposed to be alive still, I hope this means he will have a role in this!

Sucker punch right in my post-TCW feels. Thanks, I love it.

I am loving the story so far. A lot of stories on FFN never really get to the Clone Wars, and therefore never really get to the Clones themselves, and seeing some love for the Brother of the Grand Army of the Republic is always a good thing.

I also like that it is Finn who is interacting with the Clones. Gives an extra layer of goodness to the story. The First Order wants him to be a Droid, like the Kaminoins wanted the Clines to be. So him finding himself with an extended Clone family is really cool.

Incidentally, I am really hoping we get to see Kix, though I assume that won't be for a while. He is on a whole different planet in Count Dookus ship.

Now, with all that said. I am not huge on the amount of Mando'a your working with here. it makes things a bit harder to read when you have to decipher what they're saying. Plus, I don't know, they never really use it in The Clone Wars so it feels out of place, even if I know legends did have them lean into Jango's Mando roots.

Still, good story and I look forward to more.

This Fic is Fantastic and deserves all the credits.