Reading this chapter, I’m going to double down on the S3/Defenders idea. Seeing a Melvin who maybe wouldn’t get corrupted by Fisk if the others were there is a very interesting idea, no?

Hopefully

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Rereading this Chapter, I have a prompt for you. S3 of Daredevil, but with Jess and the Defenders mixed in. I guarantee the Season would have gone different if that was the case.

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Wow, I really enjoyed your fic.
Do you truely want to give me a heart attack with this last chapter... now I have to read the next one! What a Cliff Hanger. Please keep writing.

Holy cow this story was amazing! Riveting! Touching! Hilarious! Heartbreaking! I can't come up with the right words for it, but goddamnit it was brilliant. I look forward to reading the sequel, tho I wonder how I will like this Darejones pairing.

You write extremely well. The plot is smooth, scenes roll comfortably and I find no fault in your grammar. I wish you all the best in the world of writing!

One of my favorite fics of all time

That chapter. Was. Amazing. Like, powerful. The brokenness of these characters, these dark moments...just really sort of resonate on such a real, heartbreaking level. Majorly amazing.

Yep. This one got us back in the day. A sequel full of promises of angst and love and all that.

Boy, you delivered.

Unfortunately, as much as I tried to drag this out, I’m out of stories to review. So, hurry up and finish Secret so I can leave you lots of lovely reviews and sarcasm. It’s far harder to review a story you know the ending of.

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I’ll take the nice happy epilogue. Because I know what happens next.

Just a thought. Matt said his apartment doesn’t fit anymore. Does Jess ask him to move in to hers in Secret?

Is Jess even in Secret?

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Several things here. Jealous of how you write Matt. The amount of detail paints a clear enough picture even if nothing is seen.

The other; do we ever find out Gao’s fate? Yes, she’s in Inferno, but what happens to her? She dead?

Guess Inferno is next.

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The CEO’s name is Stryker? As in, Weapon X Stryker? Shared universe? Intriguing.

Good to see the Defenders finally become a team

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One of the best aspects of this chapter-something blown up in Inferno-is Matt’s struggles and Jess’s anchor. One of the best chapters.

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Oh yeah. Let the Devil out. This is gonna be fun.

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Okay, so, no way there’s not a picture of that suit. Far too much detail was put into the description for there not to be a drawing somewhere. So, where is it? I’d love to see it.

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So, of course Matt’s going back. You’d think Foggy would know that the second the others walked in. I mean, this IS Matt Murdock we’re talking about here.

Time to let the Devil out

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Once again, amazing Foggy. Concentratey lady. Nice.

However, Foggy got it wrong. They aren’t the Street Avengers, they’re the Defenders. At least, it sounds a lot cooler.

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