| Reviews for 10 years |
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   Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 9/21/2019 Little warning if Hiccup and Astrid aren't together. |
| tefe203 chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 It made me anxious! Ma still want to see a fight between Toothless and Stoick |
| Viper4K chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 Oh yes, good ol' cliffhanger. Would be funny if it would really be twins prank :P |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/14/2018 That is ok I under stand my family has had quite a hecktick life to |
| tefe203 chapter 8 . 1/10/2018 ok! :) |
| Shadowassassin reborn chapter 4 . 1/8/2018 Ontario Engle hart |
| tefe203 chapter 7 . 1/8/2018 I want a fight! |
| Mariah chapter 7 . 1/7/2018 wow very funny and poor lily hope it leaves her system? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2018 Sorry no Hiccstrid not worth my or anyone else’s time. You scum I wouldn’t even wipe shit off my boot with this story. |
| Mariah chapter 6 . 1/4/2018 wow wonder what will happen next and poor lily hope she gets her medicine? will Stoick try and take hiccup back home? |
| tefe203 chapter 6 . 1/4/2018 Now all it takes is Stoick to want to kidnap Hiccup! I'd like to see Astrid try to kiss Hiccup and his wife gets into a fight with Astrid. |
| Moniurek chapter 6 . 1/4/2018 Everyone seems really calm. The calm before the storm, maybe? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/2/2018 Finally thought, Hiccup is WAY too callous in his responses to Astrid to be the Hiccup of canon. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/2/2018 Astrid did NONE of what Hiccup accuses her of in canon. None of it. You are creating this "whole cloth." Character assassination is never ok. |
| Viper4K chapter 5 . 1/2/2018 The 'where are You from' game started just chapter ago, I thought I could give some info from myself too... Poland here and the closest thing to 'state' would be something called Zachodniopomorskie. And about google translate thing... I don't use it as much, only if I forgot the english word for something. I am leaving spellchecking to the Mozilla add-on called Grammarly (not sponsored ;] ) Well, about this story: I had slight Déjà vu about the storyline, but only on the beginning. Rest of it is pretty original, so it's alright. About grammar errors: There are a few, but no one is perfect, and even the best can make few mistakes. And maybe You are from that 'I don't give a damn about grammar' person - who knows? Most important is the fact that those errors do not kill reading joy, and many people might not notice them. And also, I like that chapter lengths! Not too long, not too short, easy to find Yourself between them, good story/dialogue ratio... Yup, You definitely got props for that :D Anyway, good job with this story! Keep it up! Cheers! |
