I love this story! You really wove so much through it, the characters, the setting, and most of all the relationships. Another wonderful job, why can't we get them to film some of these amazing stories people create here? Thanks for sharing your gifts with us!

A very nice start. Not as powerful as your opening chapter in your other fic. But a nice start regardless.

i wish the force could be used to bring peeps back to life instantly. revive ben solo!

Two stories in one. Darker, believable, good. Thank you for sharing. I read the day away!

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I got so wrapped up in the moment I forgot that he was going to have to take the texts. Sigh. Thud.

Always the red dress. I love that. Ackward, spicy, hysterical. That was fun!

I don't care how many Reylo's you write, I will read every one. Wow. Rey with a double sided saber, that's cool. Ben with a secret motive is good drama. Love it! The force is strong in this one ;)

Oh the loneliness. It can be escapist fun to have such a great story to disappear into, but I'm glad that I don't face such deep loneliness in the real world. May we all seek to help those around who may feel such desperate aloneness. I can tell this story may feel darker than Bonded. Love it!

A new adventure. I'm ready 3

Wow! This is a very creative story and I love how it highlights the true meaning behind Rey and Ben’s relationship. My favorite part was the beginning when Rey was in the cave and Kiylo ren healed her. The story about the dark artifacts also highlighted the connection of the force between the two. Another one of my favorite scenes was when Rey was fighting Ben through the force bond. It really showed why the force connected them in the first place. I also wanted to point out that the story was very on point to the details in the Star Wars movies. You can tell that a lot of effort was put into this writing. To be honest, you have an amazing and artist talent for writing. For all those hater out their. They truly don’t know the meaning of hard work, creativeness, and talent. Thank you so much for the best Fan fiction story I’ve ever read.

Oh, no no no! Ben, what are you doing? Ok, once again, you write wonderful action, and then their conversation - and by the way, I don't heap nearly enough praise on your dialogue, but HOLY COW YOUR DIALOGUE! - and then the sweetest cuddle-fest EVER, and then BAM! That ending! I literally gasped, like, out loud. Amazing stuff! You are awesome!

Wow. Just...WOW. This whole chapter was so intense! I've probably said this before, but you are so strong when it comes to writing action, and I am always impressed by how much emotion you manage to pack into it as well. You don't hold things up with introspection, but you do let us know just enough of what everyone is thinking so that everything is clear, and I think that's a really difficult balance to achieve. Seriously, awesome chapter!

“Aaaand...he's not thinking about their conversation again.”

This made my entire day. I almost died laughing. Thank you. ;)

Ooo this chapter! His determination that she will not be going down a dark path...the continued collection of the artifacts...and by the way, Ben, what in the world are you up to? And the button! That just seemed like such a Rey thing to do. I was literally smiling there. I love the way you make them interact...I'm a total sucker for these two, and you are so amazing at capturing them. Loving this!