Reviews for Haiburiddo Shinobi: The Rewrite
SPark681 chapter 4 . 2/5
Hmm, so Tsume's family is descendant of ancient werewolves and Kurenai is a succubus interesting wonder what else is in store for Naruto anyways keep up the great work!
insanemaelstorm chapter 4 . 1/18
This was good. I like the origins of the inuzuka clan and also of kurenai. I oike the idea of the monsters still existing. Like how Naruto was a bit overwhelmed due to all this. Looking forward to reading more
Guest chapter 4 . 1/16
You went full retard here. Never got full retard.
NHarem Foreva chapter 4 . 1/16
I don’t like too many flashbacks. I prefer things to be progressive. So I’d like some mini timeskips throughout the training, then get to canon
acherongoddess chapter 4 . 1/16
love the story, cant wait to read more
Lyncis Leonis Shaw-Black chapter 4 . 1/16
Hey, that's an awesome chapter! I think you should just show the first few training sessions and then timeskip to the 'canon era'. It would give us some context to lean on and you could still do some flashbacks to reveal certain aspects of his powers for example. Good luck writing the next chapter!
bob19h chapter 4 . 1/15
why not do the first few days and the last few days of training with a time skip. that way you can have the basics and the advanced skills that he would learn over time.
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 1/15
Cool story continue please.
Gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 1/15
excellent work on this chapter and glad improvement for Konoha is on the way :)
Cellboy1123 chapter 3 . 7/27/2019
I like this Story hope you update soon
Eien no henko chapter 3 . 5/5/2019
I really love this fic. Its unique and I can't wait for next chapter outta curiosity when do you think you'll update
Shifter chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
Great story continue as soon as possible please
Mr. Malfunction chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
Very nice.
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
This was rather good
Gamelover41592 chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :)
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