| Reviews for Naruto: Trinity of blood |
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   Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 1/8 'Blank'?! Seriously? Your censoring potential curse words with THAT? Dude nobody censors curse words in fanfic? Plus if you don't want to use the RUDER words, there are tamer versions of what you could have used. Like when somebody was being ordered to 'sit your blank down' you could have used butt instead you know if you don't want to use the other word. *lol* |
| Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 11/13/2019 Sucks |
| Guest 8 chapter 12 . 9/6/2019 Naruto should send his sister to Iwa & Kumo for being a breeding. Naruto should tell the Kumo & Iwa Kage the should tread this girl as a demon container cause Minato & Kushina are some still alive. |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 5 . 7/6/2019 dear God man the English spelling errors I'm not trying to be rude or a flamer but can you work on it |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 2 . 7/6/2019 the spacing needs to be made seriously this chapter is hard to read with out it |
| MysticRising chapter 7 . 6/23/2019 This is a very silly story with no depth in your characters, nothing to make them distinctive from one another, with very crude conversations and flow. But I will commend you for adding bits of humor here and there such as the pencil sharpener of orochimaru. Gods that was funny. |
| Natsubi chapter 3 . 2/28/2019 you see, i dont mind short chapters, but things like this, making it just one large paragraph of around 30-40 sentences, that makes it hard for me to read, now imagine what someone with add, or dyslexia would be like... just saying, make it more spread and organized in the future, i had to start here as the format was starting to give me a headache, sorry, it was interesting, but i cant read anymore. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/24/2018 i hope you stopped writing, this is diarrhea made into words,absolutely disgusting. Millie |
| TechnoGalen chapter 2 . 6/8/2018 Hell to the no. Based on the current reviews this is a big load of crap. Even worse on this one, you're supposed to be a teacher? Yeah, probably a liberal piece of crap excuse for one. |
| DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 3 . 6/3/2018 Fix this |
| Brandon Cook chapter 12 . 5/5/2018 Great story so far. I vote for sasake/karin. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/28/2018 You're a teacher, yet you write neglect/abandonment stories why? Why do you hate Naruto's parents so much? |
| renamonreborn chapter 7 . 4/25/2018 Alright I will be honest, the bit about Orochimaru and the sharpener made me laugh so hard I had to stop reading and get it out of my system. It took me 5 min to stop. |
| DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 2 . 4/23/2018 Fix this |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/14/2018 Short but a good chapter |
