| Reviews for The Protective Wraith |
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   MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 4 . 5/26 Please continue this story and update soon! |
| Phoenix chapter 4 . 4/10 So interesting I like to see where this goes. |
| Vampire207343 chapter 4 . 1/12 Please update |
| KitCat0922 chapter 1 . 1/2 The grammar error doesn't matter. I know that there is a mess on the story, here and there, but with thw decent stary telling and a good world-building made me ignore the apostrephe-replacemenrt-for-parenthesis thing in here. An A-ok story, but sadly won't be my favorite, not until I read further in order to cement the idea that this story is not a cliche BS that filles the entirety of FFN |
| 917brat chapter 3 . 11/28/2019 This is a wonderful story that I would love to read and i wonder so Jack is no longer in Harry/Serenity any longer or are there just the souls in her coming out only when necessary careful living until all of them go to heaven or have all of them managed to finally be at peace and go to heaven? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/7/2019 :-). |
| deathgeonous chapter 4 . 6/5/2019 I do so want more of this, it's so... so! Thanks for writing this, and bye for now. |
| Sun and moon100 chapter 4 . 11/19/2018 Please update when you can |
| FANactic Writer chapter 4 . 11/14/2018 Love the chapter!~ |
| amerdism chapter 4 . 10/17/2018 Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon. I was hoping serenity would actually fuse with jack to become well like Jack the Ripper reborn. |
| grimmzapdos chapter 1 . 8/15/2018 I wonder how dumbledore is doing |
| Alex2909 chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 nice changes from sirius |
| scorpin17 chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 love it thanks for the chapter |
| Giuseppe chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 Veo mucho potencial en tu fanfic, pero creo que obvias dos cosas muy importantes: el universo de FSN es más oscuro mientras que en Harry Potter la 'nobleza' es mucho más cruel. Los sucesos que ocurren a Sirius y su familia son "demasiado afortunados" , no se ve las características mencionadas arriba. Por otro lado, lo de conciliar de magus con el de wizards lo veo bien logrado aunque faltan pulir muchas otras cosas como el choque cultural (Bram Nuada Re LITERALMENTE hubiera MATADO por el conocimiento del Wizardkin ya que es un Magus, no un spellcaster). Finalmente, siento que has avanzado muy rápido con el desarrollo de la historia: que en 10 años el mundo wizard hubiera avanzado como en 200 es demasiado, no se aprecia los conflictos que desencadenaría. Aparte de ello repito: me gustó tu fic, espero más capítulos y que en un futuro te animes a reescribir tu historia para ver cómo mejoras al escribir historias. GOOD LUCK. |
| PasiveNox chapter 4 . 8/14/2018 Very nice yes can’t wait until school days yeah |
