Hope this story update.

Does anyone know where I can find similar stories or close to like this one?

Pls continue since you said 2 weeks

Interesting very interesting. I looked interesting as hell! I have put marks follow and I want to keep a good eye on the story that seems something that's along the romance along with Adventure and action. Please keep up the excellent work!

carry this on it is good

CONTINUE!

Hope that you find the time and inspiration to continue this :-)

Thank you :)

excellent plot, good vocabulary, wonderful emotion showed by Harry. my only issues are the fact that all the women seem too 'eager' and the lack of any non-harem/non-antagonistic characters.

pls don't abandon us

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Pathetic. From all corners.

If there was ever a time that I wanted to puke just by reading a fanfic, this is it.

When everything is bolded, nothing matters. Seriously, what gave you the bright idea of writing the majority of the chapter as a newspaper article, one that isn't possible considering the many forms of knowledge that Skeeter should not be privy to.

Learn how to break up texts into paragraphs properly.

Lily 1 is a failure of a mother.

More?

Wow, I don't know if you dropped this but it might be for the best. Your other story is way, way better than this one. The plot is pretty interesting but there are so many inconsistencies or convoluted plot points that it makes this hard to read. If you do pick this back up I recommend rewriting it, just read it and you should see most of the issues.

Nice