This is one of the best fan fictions I have read in awhile! I really hope you update! I know its been six months but I would be extatic if you kept writing this story. You have a way with words and storytelling that has me so engrossed in your inventive and mind bending tale :)

Also, this is still my favourite fanfic to date, even if your updates are frustratingly slow. And I've read a lot of fanfics. Just check out my favourites. IT'S THAT AWESOME!

Just realised after I was re-reading this for the hundredth time, that I haven't reviewed chapter 7. Certainly didn't disappoint when I first read it. I love how you're developing the story and its leaving me on my toes waiting for what happens next. I also love how you've developed Mitch, alienating him from the rest of the pack. It's brilliantly realistic, as someone who had lost everything and everyone, afraid of that happening again would be paranoid, they would play God and weigh the lives of the few against many. And as much as I anticipate Mitch dealing with the darach and then the alphas, I hope you bring the Nogistene/Void Stiles into this. After all, time travel is a tricky business and I think it would be so cool for Mitch to succeed in changing things, only to fail in preventing the one thing he never wanted to experience ever again - watching his friends die because of him. Bonus points if his younger possessed self is the trigger for Mitch to reveal who he really is.

I impatiently wait for more! Bring on the fight! Bring on the reveal!

Nicely done. Hope there is more :)

Love this story and cant wait to read more

Just found your story and hope you continue it

great story, thanks ;) can't wait for more. please continue :)
will he be with laura? more please

Please continue writing this amazing story I'm dying to know what happens next please consider finishing it thank you so much

I like how you are developing the drama and the story-line. I like the style of writing too. Though, I am curious as to how the next few chapters will unfold. I look forward to it. Keep up the hard and great work, but make sure to take care of yourself while doing so.

OOOOOO This is good!

I love that you included Supernatural references in here!

love it. but i hope you update a little faster. i really love this story and the way you write it so i hope you dont drop it.

Okay, so you know when you're browsing through fanfics, cursing whatever gods exist because all the fanfics you've found are cliché, cringe worthy or just badly written? And you know what you want to read, you know what Au you want but all the ones you find are boring and totally unoriginal?

But you do it anyway, hoping against hope that you'll find something brilliant. And every once in a while, you do. You find something like this.

A fanfic with an epic idea, woven into a story that is written with flawless skill (though there might have been a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but that's forgivable), so brilliantly funny that you laugh out loud. It's also got the canon characters IN CHARACTER?

WHAT SORCERY IS THIS?

Magnificent. A masterpiece. Only problem? It isn't finished. Or is it? I don't really know what you planned to do but from where I'm standing all I know is I'm hungry for more - no, I'm ravenous - and there's nothing left to eat. I could beg for you to finish it, but that may not persuade you. So, instead, I'll tell you how this is one of the best fanfics I've read in the teen wolf category, and many other fandoms I explore. Never forget that.

I'll be waiting.

absolutely in love with this story! keep up the good work!

Hey update already really loving your work