I loved it. Your work is amazing.

It's great that Will finally woke up and both him and Jay are doing okay. You can tell it's a relief to everyone, and Will was obviously very relieved to find that Jay was alive and not dead as he thought.
The brother moment at the end was so sweet, it was caring and brotherly and a nice scene to read.
Great chapter. Is this the last one or is there more to come? I couldn't quite tell by the ending. If this was the last chapter then great story, I loved reading it. :) xx

Jay is the older brother, Will is the younger brother. It's confirmed in the Chicago PD S02E17 episode when Will states that he's having a vacation and visiting his "older brother".

It's great that Jay woke up, now we just need Will to wake up as well so the brothers can start the healing process together.
Aww what a sweet moment Between Jay and Jack. It must have been so strange but nice for Jay, seeing his dead friend again after all these years. I hope Jack's words help Jay to let go of his guilt so he can move on, Jack obviously doesn't want Jay to continue to suffer with it so hopefully Jay will find peace now.
Poor Natalie, she's really hoping she doesn't lose another man she truly loves. Will needs to wake up and show her he's not going anywhere.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. :) xx

This was brilliant once again, excited to read more

Awesome! Can’t wait for another update!
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Wow, both brothers were really putting everyone through hell trying to save them. It's good that they are both still alive and are doing well, for now at least.
It's good Noah managed to keep it together to help Jay and point out his abdominal injuries.
I can't wait for the next chapter to see if they stay okay and what happens next.
Great chapter. :) xx

Can’t wait for the next chapter :) :) Love this story

Oh my goodness, please say that you can update this very soon. I can't wait to see how the brothers are! Great job with this chapter x

Great chapter. Tg that Will was able to call Natalie, hopefully they'll get to the hospital in time.

It's great that Will got a signal when he switched his phone on and got through to Natalie. Now him and Jay can get proper medical help. And it's lucky timing too considering Will's chest tube came out.
I hope they'll both be okay and I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder how bad Jay's condition will have deteriorated by the time they reach the hospital, because his heat stroke is pretty bad but luckily he's not delirious yet. And we know Jay, he looks fine but is always injured way worse than everyone else.
Great chapter. :) xx

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

More please!

Poor Jay, having to suffer through ptsd flashbacks while trying to help Will and keep them both safe and alive. Typical Jay to put his shoulder back in on his own, the wrong way, and to be so nonchalant about his injuries. If Will wasn't injured he'd be tearing Jay a new one even more so than he was doing.
It's good Jay was able to help Will by placing the chest tube, and even though he's struggling and is obviously hurt more than he's letting on to Will, he was able to make a shelter and protect them from the lion.
Jay's head injury looks nasty, I hope he'll be okay until they can get to a hospital.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter! :) xx

Great chapter. Can't wait for what happens next