It’s too bad that Aubrey doesn’t have Saiyan biology inside of her, because she would be pretty much unstoppable thanks to the Zenkai boost.

Ash made a Red vs Blue reference: Church tells Delta the same thing.

I knew Max would never betray Ash. Ash has always been Max's idol since he started travelling from Pokémon Advanced to Pokémon Battle Frontier.

Hey, CrusherBoy93 your Broken Friendship story has given me an idea for a story that I'm working on.

Don't worry I'll make sure to say you gave me the idea.

Ok I'm here to I'm here to solve your problems once and for all. 1. If you don't like a fic than politely leave a review so the author can improve their writing then stop reading. 2. Don't insult the author on their work and vice versa (Tyrone that means that both you and the author need to back off each other or I will deal with both of and you won't like it) 3. If you can't calmly voice your opinions then you shouldn't aught to be saying it. That's all I have to say. Guys if I see any more complaining on this I really don't want to have to deal in this again on another fic

there are some of these people that I can understand the frustration but it just means to work on getting you writing better or use better software that has spell check and check Grammar and for the love of God if I have seen something that sticks out in these reviews it's that your style isn't original try to develop a style before you decide to do a story i'm honestly try to put that as lightly as possible

Jeez, this review section is pathetic. Especially the guest reviewer, ash, calm down. Tyrone, that was a little harsh but you are right. Crusherboy, I don't mean this in a harmful way, but Tyrone is right, you are acting a little over the edge. Yes, he did insult you but he was just giving his review/opinion of this story. Yeah, it was a little too much but the way you were acting by telling him not to leave negative reviews, blocking him when he made an actual profile, and telling your fans to attack him is immature. Listen to his criticism, he's pointing out the flaws in your writing and giving you advice, albeit in a rude way. Don't get angry at people who find something they don't like and decide to give their feedback, not everyone is going to be nice and accepting in the world. Remember, criticism helps you learn from your mistakes and grow as a writer, which I feel you definitely need. With that said, I wish you well on your journey and heed my advice. It will help out a lot :)

FUCK RASCAL,IDIOT tyrone!

dont give up crusherboy

FUCK TYRONE IDIOT DUMBASS!(also rascal)

I'm normally not one to leave a negative review, even if something sucks. I'm sorry in advance, but what in the most unholy heck is this paragraph format in this chapter? You really need to separate them out when a different person speaks. This is unreadable to me because it just looks like a cluster of letters. You were doing it earlier, what happened?

I am loving the story so far and can't wait to read more. I caught an error here and there but nothing I'd really comment about as I'm more of a Content and Immersive Critic. I mainly comment on flow and how the chapter effected me emotionally. I don't Truly Review very often as IRL causes me to be mainly just a reader and leaves me unable to progress my own Fic much as it's been in Hiatus for quite a long time now. That said please stop violating the ToS Rules for FFN with you AN Rant Chapters I know FFN Admins are failures at their job but it's annoying to the people that follow your story. Honestly please be the better person and just ignore the flamers as most are just venting their frustrations about the chapter and the rest are trolls. Reviews are going to be good and mostly BAD. If you can't handle that than that's an issue you need to work through because it won't stop. Constructive Reviews will be few and far between as most just don't care and only want to read the Story. I have read Thousands of Fics and come to realize that at least 70 percent of reviews are just one sentence if not one word. The next 25 percent being flames and trolls. That last 5 percent is Constructive Reviews that 7 out of 10 times aren't very nice either. So please when you see a Guest review or a Member review that burns you or just plain trolls take a breath, put whatever your holding at the moment down and relax than push it out of your mind. I am sorry for the Rant but 3 AN Rant Chapters just pushed my buttons wrong and took me a bit to relax enough for this to be somewhat polite.

Don't let Tyrone get to you and make you stop writing. I get that criticism is okay and it can make you a better writer but there is a point where criticism crosses the line and becomes a rude comment. He does not know what he is doing and he should consider going to a nicer approach next time.

I see you left me a PM again and while I'd love to respond, I'm afraid I can't as you still have me blocked. Until you unblock me, I can't respond privately and have to stick to openly leaving my comments safely in my guest account and let the rest of your readers see our conversations as well. I'm sure you're smart enough to figure out what I mean so it's your choice from here :)

So you get mad at my reviews and tell me to make an account where we can PM to talk this out but when I share my frustrations, you go ahead and block me? Wow, I am shook at how sensitive you are. At least people now know much of a delusional idiot you really are (Love using this one since it's the one that gets you riled up the most). Man, you made me make an account for no reason. So pathetic. Good luck blocking the guest account.