:) Cute!

I think that was the most adorable thing I've ever read.

Aw, this is so cute! Amazing job!

Me: O.O *hands twitch* Need... more... of fic.

Kyno: *glares at strange bavior* You're not reading Yuri again are you? *looks annoyed* Honestly, it's like an addition.

Me: Kyno, be a good boy and shove your head up your A$$.

Kyno: *stares with afraid glance at me* Well... that was... strange. I'm not going to smart mouth for a while.

Me: You better not... but I can see that you know nothing more than to do that. I think you're lying. *looks back at fanfic writer* Well! Sorry for my little spat with the muse, but he's a butt-head. *growls* Anyways, I LOVE THIS FIC! I must make it clear that you will write more! *grabs nearest chainsaw and starts it up* I like to cut things up... *eyes Kyno evily* (can you guess what I'm up to...?)

nice cute fic

However, Kiyone seemed just sort of OOC, especially when she just started to kiss Mihoshi in the flashback..but i guess she really liked Mihoshi and her feelings surfaced...

~_-

Good story

Definitely a very entertaining story. Of course, it was more like a fragment, since there wasn't much plot, but amusing nonetheless. It was easy to read, made sense, and had a very interesting concept. I'd say a four out of five.