oh boy,yang is gonna turn really dependant on jaune,hopefully this bring them closer emotionally so they turn more ''married couple'' in dinamic than fuck buddies

Enjoyed!

Very enjoyable story and great characterization!

Fuck I'm finally able to read this chapter just to see yang blow up

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn, this thing you got going here? Don't stop it my man!

Yey new chapter

Wooo! This is great. Hoping for some babies because then there'd be more drama and I RELISH in the drama!

If ever they get out of that island. Or stay for pretty much the rest of their lives, if they manage to survive without Yang's prosthetic, which i rather feel bad for Yang and Jaune because of the consequences that the loss of it will make. I hope they make babies and all if they escape or truly can't.

Shocking chapter

Glad to see you're still working on this story.

It looks like they're starting to develop feelings for each other beyond the physical; hopefully they become a couple when they reach civilization again.

Speaking of which, it's interesting to see their hopes come so close only to be dashed. Not only was the receiver lost but their dust crystal was as well, and I wouldn't be surprised if Yang's robot arm also got damaged. I hope somebody heard that message because I doubt they'll be able to send another one. Otherwise they could build a raft and try to sail off the island in the hopes of crossing paths with a ship.

Well if that picture for your story is supposed to be a scene later on, I'm guessing that by her grabbing that it shorted out something in her arm. Although not like that would harm her much as she's taken on a lot more damage than that with just getting back up easily enough.

I would say more but I already saw most of this when you were writing it out when you posted the rough work you were doing awhile back.

good.

It’s funny that they are so into the roles the island cast them in that they already plan to do relationship things after the island. I mean adversity forms much stronger bonds than what you get from normal life and that would translate to romantic bonds.

Oof. Just when they were gonna be able to get off the island. Man, what a buzkill.

Oh...that's not good at all..Yang already had some issues when it came to being an arm short even with the robo arm..now she's gonna be seriously depressed and Jaune is gonna have to do his damndest to get her out of the major funk she's gonna be in..though I guess the cover is gonna make more sense now considering in it she's not wearing her replacement arm..still this is gonna be a major setback for them not only because Yang will only have one functional hand but also because she's gonna have severe depression since she's gonna feel like a burden on Jaune since he'll have to be doing extra work..this is gonna be a rough time for the duo coming up.