Hay, Baked! Don't sweat the changes in your skill over time. Multi-year projects almost universally do that. Pros who do long-term stuff like this usually end up adding an extra amount of time or iteration to their redraft process to even things out, and regardless that is a not-insignificant part of what proofing and editing is for. For amateur, enthusiast, or not-marketable works, the rule of thumb is to let earlier, generally rougher sections stand so long as you can, and rewrite when they become more than you can stand. Where you aren't being paid, nor are you ever like to be given the lack of legal market for crossover stories with these or most other properties, there's less pressure on you to do anything with the parts you're feeling less than happy about. fwiw, I really enjoyed what you've got, and I'd love to read more of this. Thanks!

Thank you

The biggest problem I'm seeing with this is the fact that the very first chapter (a look-into-the-future one mind you) ended with Hermione seemingly obsessed with getting back to her world, very specifically Harry. Which causes numerous problems if you're not making this some kind of harem thing which I really hope you're not, or that you at least would have warned us if you were.

You may have mentioned this in an AN and I just missed it, but I have to ask: why the hell is everyone in Skyrim suddenly British? I was kinda looking forward to Hermione adapting to the new culture, words, accents, and traditions but it seems like you're only bothering with half of them and making the rest of Skyrim an Alternate Britain.

I have read the story in one sitting (with breaks in between) and I have to say I'm really enjoying this story. I hope that you take your time with this as it certainly seems like it was worth the wait for your current readers, as of which I am now! Having said that, I cannot wait to see what happens next and in the future!

Hell yeah!

I am unsure how can this Hermione easily toss Crucio on people and then have problems killing a feral Weregirl that wants to kill her. Either she is a hardass that has no problem casting most vile spell of Potter universe while still in 4th year of Hog or she is a sweet Hermi that cant hurt people.

I like that you had Lucia be adopted and apprenticed to the temple. I always adopt her as soon as possible in my playthroughs. It's nice to see her doing better.

I swear. Every time I read another of your stories.
Love every single one.

very good so far, but I'm really curious about Her return to Hogwarts and the chaos that will cause.

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As always, this chapter was beautiful! Great job!