| Reviews for Harry Shihoin |
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   Monster King chapter 20 . 7/29 Great job loved the story |
| Theprotector19 chapter 1 . 7/24 What does the name honoryumaru mean in English? And what does the sword, the mind scape, AND she look like? |
| Monster King chapter 19 . 7/22 Awesomeness |
| Guest1794 chapter 2 . 7/14 Grammar, spelling need work as in alot of work |
| Tylol40 chapter 1 . 7/14 Great idea, not the best writing |
| Sakura Lisel chapter 4 . 7/14 Um... You need to reupload this chapter. In the scene where Harry went to warn Hermione about the troll, after the scene where Hermione asked Harry how he found her, there is a big empty space where Harry's reply is supposed to be. It looks like this. " " Harry said. |
| Monster King chapter 18 . 7/14 Awesome please continue I enjoyed the story |
| Robert77833 chapter 17 . 7/11 Are you going to continue this story? |
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 3/15 beta because you have butchered the language |
| Arkemis Foresaken chapter 1 . 2/6 get someone to beta for you that speaks and writes in English please. that away your story can be read the way you want it to be read. |
| aSleepyPenguin chapter 1 . 1/8 WOW, I can tell this story is going to be like. "Whoosh! I unlocked omega super dupa sword that has 0.000000000001% chance." "You look at my women, ill gouge out your eyes. *Moments later* Hey girl I just met im going to say a sentence then have sex with you because somehow you've become into a dog in mating season." (Yes, my grammar was intentional.) |
| Monster King chapter 17 . 12/1/2019 Great story please continue it soon |
| Jestersky98 chapter 1 . 11/24/2019 The grammar is so bad that I cannot even read this I understood probably half of the chapter and everything was so incredibly disjointed that it's even worse |
| Ferris39 chapter 1 . 9/7/2019 "Bad grammar". No freaking shite. When I looked at the text it felt like my eyes were going to take a long walk... right through the back of my skull. |
| Thanos chapter 2 . 8/5/2019 This is what made me snap my fingers. |
