Enjoyed this very interesting story! Loved ALL the crazy characters.
Thanx for sharing.

Lovely. Thank you.

Wow Esme and Carlisle. Esme leave him and enjoy the fruits of your marital labor. Let him be the old man chasing skirts and you be the fabulous sober grandma to those kids. M’kay?!

I’m glad Bella understood in the end because laying into Edward because you married a douche who attacked him in the men’s room is uncool. Also how can you compare that omission to your cheating ex and his bimbo? I was hoping she wasn’t that self-righteous.

Losers always want what they can’t have. I’m so glad the kids plan worked;-) btw that Heidi is adorable.

So this is a new definition of parent trapped huh? Poor Bella just wants a bath and Edward needs a clue. I’ve worked out many a disagreement in small spaces. Good luck y’all.

These poor people deserve some happiness. All of them. So how long since Angie’s death? Was it an accident or illness? Is Edward about the same age as Bella? Oh Jeesh if Edward and Bella marry will she give him twins. They both seem to have

Good god Jane is a work in progress that’s trying. So, so trying. Deep cleansing breath.

Okay so sad from the start pulling no punches. Um, is this story in Alec’s voice? And how old is everyone for some perspective. Thanks. ;-)

Oh these kids are good! Locking the parents in the bathroom. Hahaha

Never underestimate what may happen when a bunch of kids put their minds together. Let’s get Edward back to the land of the living!

:) This is cute! Thanks for writing!

Loved this sweet story. Thank you.

Cute story! It felt much more like a coming of age story for the teens than a romance, but adorable just the same!

Great. Loved it. Thanks for writing.