Sylph be like that guy in youtube who said that steel is heavier than the feathers

Other than the fact that the Lilith sisters seemed to be forgotten even in the True End/Chapt 37, fantastic work!

The plot felt a bit rushed in the last chapters, but it was still a fun story to read. Thanks for the good work.

Lucifina killing Heinirch was a great twist, but IIRC in canon Heinrich died because he eroded himself to death from overuse of AH and from basically showering himself in Angel blood.

What an amazing ride! i just played paradox recently and i stumbled upon this while reading comments from the wiki.

Wow, what an amazing ending. This story is clearly the best MGQ story on this site. You truly did a remarkable job with the worldbuilding, with the characters, and with the lore. This has been an amazing journey and I am both sad and happy we are at the end. I'm sad because I loved reading this story and following the amazing journey you were writing. But I'm happy that we got such an amazing conclusion.

Congratulations in finishing the story. It was a wonderful ride all the way through, and I'll be sure to come back to it as I go through Paradox part 3, whenever that's coming out and whenever it gets translated. Anyways, great job, and I can't wait to read more of your works. This has been a great journey, and I really love this story!

Perhaps a little late on the draw, but I'd like to thank you for your work and congratulate you on completing it.

Ever since I saw Alicetroemeria in Paradox I wanted to hopefully learn more about Heinrich's journey outside of the basics, and this was a very effective fic at playing around with the unknowns while keeping to canon. I even forgot Dinah as a character existed (well, was mentioned) until this story.

I'm also especially glad you wrote two endings. While I did mostly want to ensure the story was wrapped up pertaining to canon (I must admit, I was hoping to see more of Lucifina's famous childish sadism), having a happy ending after growing to love both Alice and Heinrich's characters was something I needed.

So good job. Hope to see more written works from you in the future.

holy crap what a fantastic end, I've been reading this story since it was first created and it has really come so far in the last two years.

*claps* Great story.

One of the best serious MGQ stories on the internet. You definitely deserve praise and a long break; writing 242K words in a year and a half is admirable. I wish I could update as consistently as you.

Well, it's been one hell of a time reading this as the years passed by. I have to say, this is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and it's been exciting and intriguing to see how you handled this part of MGQ's history, as well as how you wrote out the interactions and scenes the cast, both the original and the OCs, would have with each other. It's been a pleasure to have read this story with both its canon and happy endings! This was certainly a story that was worth reading and waiting eagerly for, if not one of the best MGQ stories ever written. And, feel free to take a break from writing- You certainly deserve one after writing something as great as this. Until next time!

Making me hate Ilias even more lol

Just read this from start to end, and I have to say that this story is fantastic! This is probably the best Monmusu Quest story I’ve read, with only ‘Monster Girl Saga’ by GenocideHeart coming close. You definitely deserve more readers.

I can feel it coming... The Final Battle is over the horizon!

Salamander is awesome. I love how you've written her. The battle between the Three Nobles was excellent too, with Heinrich now able to hold his own against some of the strongest monster. It's been great to see his growth. I liked that we got to see some more perspective from Heaven's side of things; it's an I testing dynamic with Illias and her daughters, so I love seeing more on that front. Great job as always!