Reviews for The Heartbeat
LadyJose chapter 30 . 8/1
this story is so good it made me cry several times
avidreader70 chapter 30 . 4/9/2019
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.
BabiiGiirl22 chapter 30 . 2/17/2019
This was a beautiful story.
Konata3012 chapter 30 . 9/26/2018
I wanted to thank you for writing such a great storry. I love it so much. It is my top 2 fanfiction of all time. And that is saying something since I read a lot of fanfict in the last 10 years xD
It is so well written and the characters and their relationships are perfect. I enjoyed every single chapter.. I was laughing and crying along the way. You really captured my emotions with your writing.
The only complain I have is how long it took Merthur to happen. I understand why, tho. I, too, like Gwen and you had to put her relationship with Arthur to an end before starting it with Merlin. I loved the way you did it. Arthur loved Gwen, but his true soulmate will always (quite literally in your story) be Merlin.
Again, thank you for such a great storry, I hope you decide to write some more long stories in this fandom, because you are really talented! Love you! :D
Crystalzap chapter 30 . 8/21/2018
this was sweet and SO much better than cannon's ending. You made it much more believable too than most fics. Instead of them immediately getting together and hurting Gwen who they both loved (in their own way) They got together while still respecting her, though if she hadn't died young I'm not sure what any of them would have done... would they all (Arthur, MErlin, Gwen) just keep going on as they had been?

Anyway Prince Philip was an awesome idea. Though it does sadden me that they never had kids, they both would of made great fathers. Least I think so.
mynameiswho chapter 30 . 6/17/2018
I just starting to watch the series again recently, first time i watch it is when i am teeneger or so. But i became a shipper after realising how much Merlin care and worrying about Arthur that it was so unreal to be called friendship in my opinion.. watching the end of the series is breaking my heart thinking how Merlin would live the rest of his life without Arthur... thanks God your story giving me a bit reasurring end.. a story that was meaningfull that i would ever read.. once again thank you for putting my heart at ease... Keep up the good story, ok...
StarBolt1966 chapter 30 . 6/17/2018
Wonderful Ending ... Just the way the series should have ended.
I've been with the story since the beginning and have to say ... Awesome job!
apukwa chapter 30 . 6/6/2018
Splendid ending and wonderful epilogue.

Great book, thanks so much for writing it!

Now I'm waiting for the sequel... ;)
Sakae Doragon chapter 24 . 6/5/2018
So, Merlin forgave Arthur for sleeping with another after their feelings were revealed at last?

Just like that?!

What Merlin did he did out of love for Arthur, guilt, to protect him, and confusion. This didn't just involve Arthur, it concerned Merlin too and to realize that you are immortal... Well, it takes time to process.

But Arthur... He slept with another. That is the ultimate betrayal I believe. You kissed someone else, you touched and let someone else touch you... And then to go right after this to Merlin and touch him... Kiss him. Not only that, but their FIRST kiss. It's tainted. Arthur touched another, kissed another and he has the gall to go and hold Merlin, to kiss him.

I'm sorry, I don't think that is acceptable. If I was in Merlin's place... Well, I bet Arthur would sure be glad that we were immortal because he would need all of that time for me to even consider forgiving him.

I think I'm going to stop reading here, I just can't continue after this.
James Oliver Wood chapter 30 . 6/5/2018
So adorable. Cried in the end.
Guest chapter 30 . 6/4/2018
;-; an ending is always heartbreaking (no pun intended) and this one is no different... This was truly and incredible and amazing story. I've read it from the very start and I'm glad that I stayed to keep reading
Magpie1600 chapter 30 . 6/4/2018
Aw h that is a fantastic ending. I really loved it.
Nerdy Queen chapter 30 . 6/4/2018
Oh my god that was such an amazing ending! Thank you so much for writing it that way
mersan123 chapter 30 . 6/4/2018
Thank you for a wonderful story. You have no idea how happy it makes me to see Merlin have Arthur with him throughout all those years.
Perfect ending for the story too.
Many thanks.
LoverOfAllThingsWeird chapter 29 . 6/1/2018
This was a beautiful story and it was so well written. The idea was so original and the plot was amazing. I cried at Gauis, and Gwen’s deaths and I’m so glad I read this. It was wonderfully made.
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