Wow please continue
Thank you

I like the way this chapter ended, and how you merged incorporated key elements from cannon. It sucks that we lost Henry, but it's great that both his parents get a do-over. I did appreciate that you let us know that even though he's not supposed to, he has somehow managed to retain parts of his original self, so all isn't completely lost.

Great chapter

Hmmmm... I like the idea of Lily getting a do-over. But I'm especially thrilled that Mal didn't want to take that offer right away because she loves and accepts the woman Lily has become. In thinking about the chance for a do-over, I'm glad the Charmings didn't try to do that to Emma. Knowing that they could get a chance to raise both their kids together, I'm glad they didn't try to take Emma away. Although, with Hook's repeated attempts, and the Blue Fairy's interference, I'm almost paranoid enough to suspect them of trying to...

While Emma may not be ideal, at least she's trying. It's great to see Regina connecting with other people, and not just focusing on Emma. I do wish Emma could be more sensitive, however. She casually mentions Charlotte and having another child with Regina often enough to be concerning. Regina just lost her baby, why would she want anyone mentioning her having a new child when she's still mourning the one she lost?

On another note, I understand that you're trying to have Regina's knowledge and expertise complemented and balanced by Emma's, but it sometimes makes absolutely no sense where you try to achieve it. So Regina not knowing about ice skating and hockey seems a little weird, given that the curse put her in main where I'd assume knowledge of winter traditions and sports would be included. Like if the curse had placed them in Florida, why would she need to know about ice skating? Or if the curse placed her in Europe, why would she need to know about the 4th of July? But it placed her in New England where winter sports and events are very much a part of our culture. Nonetheless, it's somewhat plausible that the curse wouldn't give her that knowledge, but then in the first part of this series, you made it so that Regina didn't know anything about vaccines. How could she be a superior who knows about American school systems, uniforms, has done research on cutting hair and what to do for her first child (Henry), but had no knowledge of vaccines/ inoculations? Why would the main doctor of an entire town have to Google info on the measles if the curse made him a doctor for an entire population? Why would Emma- of all people- be the one to give a doctor like Whale info on treating patients? The same Emma who apparently never even thought to follow up on Henry's grades, and didn't even know if her son wore a uniform to school or not? There are many parts of this series that font quite make sense, but I do understand what you were trying to accomplish overall. Do you have a beta?

Hmm.. I like that Emma is finally paying some attention to Regina and actually trying to support her- in her own way.

I did notice that Robin featured heavily in this chapter, but there was no tension between he and Regina. In the author's realm, Regina twice mentions that Robin rapid her. Yet, now it's as though it never happened. Did they not retain any memories of that alternate reality?

Great chapter. I loved Regina with Neal. I also really enjoyed Henry being so well immersed in Regina's culture. It's cool to see him speak the language and interact so easily with his mother's people. Finally, the ending of this chapter had me cracking up with Hook's possible diagnosis and Emma's reaction. That left me chuckling for a while. I'm still not impressed with Emma. We see her trying to pressure Regina for sex in this chapter as a go-to behavior. I'm glad Regina was able to resist, but why she still wants Emma after seeing almost no signs of her changing is beyond me.

Oh my God nooooo! This can’t be happening! They were so close to being a family and now the darkness takes Emma away?! I’m dying! This is sooo good! I just can’t wait for the next chapter!

So I love this chapter I am so happy Regina is pregnant again and little Henry is amazing. I just have a question what made you choose that name for the new baby and how do you pronounce it?

First off...I love little Henry I don't want him to grow up Just yet Uhh too adorable

Second I knew there would be another Little Swan-Mills taking residence inside of Regina soon And I cannot wait for their baby She's powerful already

Third That cliff hanger has me with so many emotions i don't know where to begin Imma need another Chapter :D Amazing Amazing Chapter

Hey I love this story I hope you continue it thanks from Puerto Rico

Great chapter! So much mystery going on with Hook and Vlue. Love seeing Lily and Mal making an appearance. Henry growing up again and this time with Emma too sounds awesome! Have I mentioned before how much I love this story? LOL

I love this story. I am so captivated by your writing I can’t wait for what comes next.

Absolutely fantastic chapter as always! The family moments with Santa were my favorites with Regina’s explanation about Santa’s appearance. Your attention to detail in your story always astounds me! I wish there was a way to list this as a super favorite story because I would! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Oh my heart. Little Henry is precious! You have melted my heart of stone with him.