Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. Keep up the great work.

Nice. Nothing like altering the timeline in places, and this would be pretty interesting. Max probably knows Rachel's fate, and is left with the moral question of "Do I warn them?"

uhm, yes more. my gay heart needs happiness. been suffering serious depression since i finished this game. it hit me very hard as shortly before i finished before the storm i got news my best friend has only about a year left. 3

i really like where you are going here.

Please continue. I long for a different version from the cannon where Chloe doe at have to once again lose someone.