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That girl was nice. I wouldn't mind going shopping with her.

I'm glad you're back!
I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
I can't wait to read more.

Good chapter, I always thought it’s weird and dumb that velvet couldn’t protect herself despite being a senior student who kills Grimm occasionally.

I might be a little late, but you may still be able to recover your files if your hard drive isn't busted. SATA to USB adapters exist to lonk your hard drive to a computer externally, or you can buy a casing for yoir hatd drive and use it as an external hard drive later after recovering your files.

Neo. Neo NEO! I think Neo will turn good. ps Have Neo as a harem plz

Great Story bud. Oh and Merry late Christmas lol :)

Can someone give me the link for previous/original story ? Just curious since i can't find it.

Update the story

Pretty good I'm just going to assume Blake is going to be the main girl based on how he mentioned that she was his favorite character but all in all i cant wait for the next chapter so update fast.

This rewrite is a lot better than the original.

As a tip from one writer to the other, prior to posting the next and future chapters of this story as well as others, upload the chapters individually in the doc manager instead of copying and paste. This makes editing a lot easier. I do this myself.

"Hot off the press" chapters are usually littered with spelling/grammer errors.

That said, update soon.

I'll see how this goes. Interesting...also, I don't know who the villain is, but I'll keep reading until I figure out who it is...actually...a lot of characters CAN be turned to the good side. Emerald is possible, Cinder is possible, and Neo is possible...and who is it I wonder? Anyways! I'll keep on reading.

Cinder

the story is okay so far but everyone is pretty ooc and breaking the guys arm wouldn't have happend cause aura

Dang this was good.