Dam zoe never apologised

Damn,

I know I'm kinda late here and you probably don't write anymore, but I would love to see more of this :)

awwwwww I really, really, really, ship zoecy

Come on, get back in that writing mood and update! I really like the story!

Umm, in chapter 2 you kinda called Poseidon, Poseidong. I couldn't stop laughing! (Sorry I'm a bit of a perv...)

I now have quickly read through these five chapters for a second time waiting for an update! I’m already so invested in this story only five chapters in and I really would love to see where this would go

Only mistake im finding repeatedly is your spelling of "being", theres no 2nd 'e'
Other than that, good stuff

I did enjoy the first chapter immensely from Percy's scheme to the reaction of the Olympians, and his plan getting absolutely shat on by the fates.

Hey I really like the story so far, I think you are a doing a pretty good job at depicting Zoe she would definitelt be a obsessive type if she was in love, but saying that I feel like she needs to have a bit of mental conflict with herself, due to her hating men for the past couple of millenia, otherwise it will progress too fast. Although the nice things Zoe does needs to be recognised by Percy in small steps as a build up of over coming his los for Annabeth and being capable to love someone else, um I hope this helps in anyway. Love the story!

So will this end up Percy x Zoe?

Nice Chapter

Love this story

Its good m8 keep it up

Once again great chapter, can't wait to see how Zoe will apologize