A Nice story about this rare couple. In the end, those condons came in hand.

Hey, man can u update this fic. It's been a long time . I would love to see this fic continued. There r very few Touma x seiri fics. And u were doing a great job with this fic. So, pls continue.

Finally a ToumaSeiri story it was great but why censored Himigami name ? still i would love to see if you write another story about them

Finally, a ToumaxSeiri story, and it's got an off-screen sex too. But I think it's a little too mean to censored Aisa's name just because she's a background character. And please, no Aogami as the Number 6.

ps. what about a request story instead? Just asking.

You have something against poor Himagami? I realize that she's supposed to be the ultimate background character (i.e. ever present but completely unnoticable), but she does still have a name.

bwahahaha gotta love this work art! great for a one shot, but i do hope we have more of your work in the future in this fandom xD

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Ah, my sides. This was so brilliant. You have no idea how much I loved this; it suits perfectly as a one-shot and for that alone, I'm just satisfied that you had the motivation to write this.

The comedy was on point. Hel, even referencing Himegami was on point too and the small amount of suffering she got was gold. Even though there was a bit of strangeness on my part when I first saw the story, seeing how you gave it the attempt and I enjoyed every single dam bit of this, let me tell you that I' loved this to bits. Seeing the small misunderstandings of Fukiyose here and there and the misfortune of Touma was gold, especially with the ATM FUBAR bits you threw in there.

It was interesting to see the twist of Fukiyose being a big more aggressive but the 119th element and the black hole stuff was stuff I've never really seen (at least from memory) on this site, but it was gold to have you out it in here. Loved this story and the ending as well, especially with the characters you had as the story focus and Aogami; the username you have sort of checks out in that regard to that reference.

Seriously, great story and just perfect. Thanks so much for this.

Mr ?

...Ever have one of those moments where your randomly searching for stuff, and you end up seeing something that slightly interests you, only to find that it delightfully exceeds your expectations?

That's the case here, I believe. It was a nice surprise that this was as good as it was.

The unnamed characters was unusual for me, as well as I particularly dislike mixing Japanese words into English speech when writing (it's a personal pet-peeve of mind, its not a big deal), I still really liked this.

Everyone feels in character and I can kinda imagine Fukiyose reaching a breaking point and doing something other than punching him. And seeing her actually encounter and deal with the chaos that is his misfortune was nice; I think she refuses to believe his misfortune excuse simply because she doesn't truly understand it. The implication of her going "That Far" might have been a bit much, but it doesn't take away from what you have here.

Also the cameo of a certain Berserker from a certain other series bring misfortune to Aogami's life was amusing to say the least.

All and all, this is good stuff! Good job with this!

Sincerely,
ArmoredCoreNineBall, your friendly (not)robotic (not)overlord (possibly)person who occasionally writes things.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ... (after composing myself) Well That Was Something Completely Unexpected ... and rather well done, too. If I read it right, this is a one-shot ... pity, but that's the author's perogative. Will say nothing more that might spoil things for those who haven't read it yet, so I leave behind my APPROVAL!