I really like this a lot

This is so fucking good. I like it a lot -chapter 4 in just 1 hour

Hiiii I’m back again! Love this chapter, made all the warm and fuzzies persist in my stomach and nearly squealed because they are sooo cuteee. Oh yeah another tip regarding flow of reading; when writing dialogue, try to keep it consistent and end each chunk of dialogue with a speech mark. I notice you like splitting big paragraphs of speech in two to make it more earlier to read but without ending the paragraph with speech marks it looks odd. For example: "I'm not. I think that Kaya is pretty and all and I like the fact that I cheer her up with my stories. She makes me feel important. But that's as far as it goes.” He leans forward to rest his chin on his knees.

“...I admire the relationship between you two. The way you lean on each other in trying times and able to build each other back up again. I'd like something like that and I don't see that..." his eye continue to search the horizon.

See how I left the dialogue alone but continued to add more action to build the scene and end it with speech marks? Yeah something like that might help with overall flow and how it looks! I really hope this helps! Now for me, back to reading

I really like your story and at some points it is confusing because of spelling errors or maybe use of punctuation but it’s okay because the message still gets through. Maybe when doing the flashback scenes of Luffy and Nami you should have it in italics so that as a reader we know it’s not the current period in time. Also there are times when you switch between first person and third person which gets a little confusing so be sure to watch what person of view you are writing in! Overall I really like how cute this is and as a reader, I will try to write more reviews!

Hi, i don’t know if you’ll see this review but i really hope that you do. I loved every bit of this story, it was a wonderful experience. In all honesty it helped me acknowledge my own relationship and experiences and made me feel a lot of emotions. I am so happy i got to this point and i wanted to congratulate you for going on until the end even though it might have been tough sometimes. I read the note where you told us readers that the lack of reviews made you lose motivation and as an aspiring writer myself i totally understand. But let me tell you that you have so much potential in narration. This story was so bubbly and fluffy and everything went so smoothly without it being overdone. Sure there’s flaws and mistakes, nothing is perfect but that just adds to its beauty! really thank you for making my day and for making me happy! i encourage you with all my heart to keep going and to improve yourself even more!

this story really needs a sequel

That was amazing. Thank you.

What the-! Didn't know it was updated until i saw the word corona virus. Hope you guys have been well and take care.

This chapter is just too sweet really liked it to the point where i keep coming back when i'm feeling sad and doubtful.

This is probably one of the greatest fics I’ve read and I would love to see more or maybe even a sequel to this, it would be great to see how it would work out in the future for them, but anyways have a good and keep up the great work

great fic

I'm touched, a very beautiful end. Thank you for writing in this fandom, I'm glad to read your work and of course will wait for your other

Wow. What a finish. I didn't cry noooo nope no nuh-uh did not cry.

I love it. Such a good fic thank you for sticking to it through the end. It's because of your perseverance why we now can enjoy a completed fic. Especially a LuNa fic!

Ohhhh shiiii

gracias por actualización me encantan tus historias me preguntaba si considerarías hacer una en otro periodo de tiempo como el japon antiguo