Oh poor Justin. Now, if Aryalynne dealt with his problem, he would be happy but he kind of would have cheated .

Bahahahaha! This is hilarious! I love it, honestly. Although isn't Michael Corner a Ravenclaw? It doesn't matter, l'll still read but, you know, minor details :) great story otherwise, keep it up!

Are you EVER going to update? This is a REALLY awesome story, that's REALLY funny.

PLEASE update- it's been 8 years, your fans deserve it.:D

This was so brilliant! It was laugh-out-loud hilarious, completely right on the nail as far as pointing out flaws in MS stories goes, AND an interesting story all on its own. I loved so many of the lines in here, if I started quoting I'd probably end up putting in half the story.

I'm really sorry to see that you're probably not going to be writing more for this, because I really enjoyed this and it was really a terrific piece.

This may be 6 years old, but I love it. :D

Hilarious! "you. me. shake booty." - I almost fell off my chair from laughing! The non-involved character observing mary sue is a very original angle. Go Hufflepuffs!

I am utterly loving this. Please update soon.

Adi

Aww... Poor Hagrid... This is such an amazingly funny story. XD I can't wait for the next chapter.

wow. this is brilliant. i love how unique it is!

This was great. Funny and amazing, and I loved getting into Justin's head. And his gag reflex.

~Ani

Interesting story and nicely written! I always liked Mary-Sue parody's, and this one is subtle and well written! Nice job and well written story.

You have a very ...interesting... story. The Hagrid bits are genious and I especially enjoyed the rational mind and gag reflex conversations. The changes that are invading the story are so close to the ones conquering this site making thourghly intriuging reading. Best wishes! Amazingly funny story!

Write more!

I loved the conversation between the different portions of Justin's mind. I really, really wish this was going to be updated. It's too fun a story to let die.

Fun! I especially like the bit about them noticing that everyone in the school has changed. I was going to quote it all, but it was too long, so I'm just going to quote my favourite line: "You're both daft," said Michael when they told him. "Of course the Hufflepuff house was affected. Didn't you notice a while back when everyone in our house temporarily became fat, blithering idiots?"