update naman pre

update please

Ano to

This fic is going in the direction of the canon peaceful route which is not realistic. Plus in your story the sedarens take down and deface a important mounument to the Filipinos or was it a WAR MEMORIAL? If so then the Filipinos would be very angry.

You have no idea how much I've waited for an update.

update please

Also, Merry Christmas and a Happy new year!

Some dialogue with the characters' langauges can make the story fun to read and add some diversity in it. It should be distinguished from English to the languages of our Recon team or other characters. It'll be nice to read the story with that kind of speciality

As I read this story, I saw a lot of improvement from last year (which I stopped reading fanfiction for a while). I like chapters that are loaded with informationThe portraying of the characters and the Filipino military balances well in my opinion. Keep it up and Mabuhay kabayan!

Despite the earlier Anti-Duterte rantings(?), I still continue reading the story. One thing though, avoid much realpolitik from now on by not introducing real politicians. However, it may be nice if once in a while both views of the Philippine political arguments surface. One thing is that we don't like China "bullying," us but are we doing the same to Sadera? What does being Filipino really means? Is it justified to kill one to save a thousand and to kill a thousand for a million? Same rhetoric is used to justify the drug war. Also, if you want to be realistic, there are several people currently undergoing rehab than those being killed in the drug war. Furthermore, there are those drug personalities who are killed by their own partners and not by government forces. How about people who, while is against the current administration, does not really care about the victims of drug war but only uses them to leverage their candidacy (like what's the point of bringing a dead body to EDSA? Unless there is an attempt of inciting another revolution). Yup, realpolitik is very complicated. That's why I advice you that if you delve much deeper to politics, give more time to explore both sides and list all the arguments thrown by both sides whether truth or lies and let the readers decide without heavily leaning on one side or another.

Author you are a total bitch! Because you are very taking too long boo! The readers are cannot read your story anymore!

Stupid author always lazy to write this story it's been a year that you updated this story. What a loser.

What if the Philippines revive the lost weapons from 30 years ago.

I would like numerous issues to be addressed.
1. These are brown people interacting with white locals. Have some dialog acknowledging the difference between the races. Also demihumans.
2. More substance in the narration of events, actions and more.
3. Make the scenes more personal. Needs more individualism shown in rather than just names and ranks.

Do that and maybe I'm more up for it.

I hope this won't be just a rehash of canon with Filipino characters.