I truly loved this story! Beautiful descriptions, wonderful storytelling, great characterizations. I read it on AO3 so all the juicy parts were amazing and filled with love. Sigh. Thank you for such an amazing story. Can't wait to see what you write next!

It's a well written story but I find there are two main issues. Your cutting out of the M content is very jarring as it messes with the flow of the story. Now I know you have posted those portions elsewhere but it doesn't change the fact that the story's flow is interrupted and the reader is left scrambling for context.

Secondly there doesn't seem to be much of a grander plot beyond their interactions. I'm hoping that that will change.

That was good. Moving a bit fast but I suppose there are a ton of timeskips in between.

Hmmm... you kept starting a line of dialogue without finishing it and moving onto other stuff. You also left a lot of things unclear. How did he touch her? etc.

Another great one. Keep it up.

That was a great chapter and a strong start. The writing was excellent as well. Keep it up.

Great chapter.

Love it very much update soon but take your time with it

Okok so bear with me I'm one big tired and stupid individual. So the force actually meant they didnt have to separate per se but more like until the galaxy healed/war ended they have to keep getting separated I.e. while on missions etc?
Haha lol Ioved that part from when Rey landed and then the later on scene where they are getting shot.
I wonder what colour Ben's new saber would be. I like red tbh I know it's a dark side colour but it's my fave
Wow I cant believe this story is over I'm sad it is lol. I wanted to get all my star wars stories read in time for the release of the rise of Skywalker (better not kill off Kylo though I know it will happen lol).
Gl with life etc xx

Wow I dont regret reading this before i went to sleep. I was so busy being happy that Ben and Rey found each other and wondering whether this dark presence was Palpatine, Snoke or some other dark side user.
So imagine my surprise when the chapter just went insane lol.
When Palpatine showed up in all his corpsy glory I was just doing a combination of "aaah" and *retch* I have a thing about decaying villains prob childhood trauma from the mummy lol.
And then the climatic battle wooo that was so good I was eagerly waiting for Palpatine to get his backside handed to him.
Keep the the great work xx

Wow I loved this chapter so much.
Especially the whole Han and Ben scene and the whole will he save Han or not/wouldn't that change how things are now?
Oh man both sides of ben and rey meeting up and realising something wasnt right. Did rey really kill ben or just the illusion ben?

PLEASE tell me that’s not how this ends! So much was left hanging. I can’t keep myself from reading your stories. This Reylo is one of the better ones! Hoping for another chapter!

Amazing

Good chapter, thank you

I love this chapter!

And if Kylo gets killed in the next Star Wars movie, I wont be watching it.