omg! this is amazing! i love it! please update :)xx

Oh this is so good, wonderful...can't wait for the next one xx

I feel like I'm too tired to fully appreciate how amazing this chapter is, and I'm sorry. I have no words for it. So many things happened, and all of it was glorious.

I Love and adore the tender moments, but I also love the playful side of the pair—negotiating the work load matches the pair two a tee. You’ve kept an amazing mix of canon characterisation with Tommy and the creative license this story needs with how he’s like behind closed doors. Constructively, my only insight would be to add a little more scenic description with the actions of the character, include a little more of Tommy’s insanely seductive cigarette actions while adding in some atmosphere—part of the brilliance of the show is how it sets a scene and with your talent of characterisation and dialogue brilliance, I have no doubts you’ll achieve some amazingly awesome work. As always love what you do and look forward to your next chapter

Him interesting Alex's former brother in law is looking for her. I hope nothing bad happens to her she is still trying to heal. And her and tommy seem to make a very good couple that know how to work with each other.

God this chapter was so cute! Domestic Tommy kills me.

Awesome story I really love it and I like how you put in a lot of work with finding translations of everything that you write into it. Great job! I can't wait to read more of your story. It is amazing!

I honestly grinning like a loon enjoying this chapter. I love this dive into who Thomas Shelby is once you take the hardened soldier and gangster away. This intimacy and gentleness is barely touched upon in the series—only little teases, so it’s nice to see it so well portrayed here

dang it interrupted. I love how they are when it's just them. leaving me in suspense is just killer cant wait till the next chapter

Call me creepy, but I love moments where one person is having a nightmare, and their SO comes in while they're sleeping, and suddenly the nightmare is over.

Poor Alfie.

I love how you’ve captured the reluctant yearning. I’d love to see their reunion xx thanks for the update—super keen to read more of your work

yes come on tommy give in you know you want to, you need to! great chapter and I love the set up for alfie. cant wait till the next chapter!

Absolutely loved this chapter! Can’t wait until the next one!

Awe, you're making me blush. Lol

I love this chapter. I love how Tommy is a stubborn hardass, but he still listened to Alfie when Alex was concerned. I love how you wrote Tommy's nightmare, too. It showed his inner struggle involving his demons and how they concern Alex. Also, I absolutely adore the part where Alfie picked up the puppy while he was telling Tommy off.

I’m really enjoying this story. Thank you for the update