Loved it

Oh I loved your story! The plot was refreshing, no smut but it still captured your attention. You wrote their story in a way that brought out the characters, situations and surroundings perfectly! They were so real and clear in their portrayal, you seriously made me feel like I was like watching them and not reading! LOVE your writing!

Wow! I loved this chapter! The way you have them speak to each other, the way you have them express themselves, it's like I'm not reading it. I can't explain it, it's so well done that it feels like I'm watching a movie! LOVE your writing style!

Fab story. Loved it. Made me laugh.

This was so well written! I love the slow burn and angst

I love your characterization!

Nice story! Thank you for the lovely reading piece!

Very nice story. You apply such sensitivity to figure out the inner life of the charachters and then let their actions speak. And you build the story in such way that everyone is always where they are supose to be for the plot unwind. I really admire your talent and skill as a storyteller.

That is a beautiful story, really well written! I loved the slow development of their relationship, I think it's true to their characters.

I really love this story. The relationship between Hermione and Severus is great and well developed. Thanks for sharing

very sweet and just enough angst to be believable

spicy!

omg I would have hated you if you stopped it here!

hahahahaha I can't believe he tricked her into going! the

I love how he ruined the very good with the word attempt. Very Slytherin