| Reviews for Hidden Deep Within (OLD) |
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   AstoriaPheonix chapter 9 . 8/1 im listening to happy music as I read this (warmth and contentedness, look it up) and it's so adorable YAY :D :D :D :D :D |
| VakamaPrime chapter 14 . 10/25/2019 Awww no! I love this! Why did it STOP?! You gotta keep going! Ooo! Can Jim like... randomly go onto animal mode? And maybe scare the heck out of his friends? Also, for me, Jim took being a changling really well, sooo... maybe could you have some more inner conflict? The thing in The Deep was supposed to be Jim's worst fear right? So, his worst fear would be loosing his humanity... I read that somewhere! Maybe you could elaborate? Anywho! You have an amazing talent for writing! Keep it KRISPY with a K! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/8/2019 Absolutely love this and I can’t wait for the rewrite to be finished |
| WikiSorcerer chapter 14 . 7/26/2018 I recommend keeping the old version up in-case the rewritten version goes nowhere. |
| TechGrl chapter 13 . 7/12/2018 This is so good! The writing has just enough detail and dialogue, and a good amount of humorous acts as well. Keep up the good work! :) |
| Puppet chains chapter 13 . 6/15/2018 I love this fanfic. will Jim tell his mother about all the trollhunting stuff?(you may off already mentioned this and I just missed. sorry if I did) can't wait for the next chapter! |
| samdragon57 chapter 13 . 6/10/2018 Aaaaaaaaaaa i see those season threes references! Awesome chapters! Ah poor boy got burned. But yay, Strickler and Nomura make an appearance! Excited for more! :D |
| Katla1 chapter 13 . 6/5/2018 Ah, there. :) Shadow portal away, guys. I can't wait to see what Blinky thinks of Nomura training an injured Jim! |
| Katla1 chapter 12 . 6/5/2018 Why can't they get him to Trollmarket via shadow portal? Poor Jim. :( I love-I mean HATE it when he gets hurt. ;) |
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 8 . 4/2/2018 question: Why doesn't Jim just put the mask on? That way it'll be a transformation and magic, but shouldn't the mask work on him to make him... well, him? |
| WyldClaw chapter 3 . 3/27/2018 oooooh! No-Jim is creepy |
| WyldClaw chapter 2 . 3/27/2018 that was a great chapter |
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 what a spine-tingling first chapter |
| Katla1 chapter 11 . 3/26/2018 JIM! |
| Bubblekins1010 chapter 11 . 3/25/2018 Uh-Oh. Please don't turn Jim to stone. He really has worse problems that need dealt with right now. ;D |
