This is a good one! Jedite's a real tsundere, isn't he? I mean, he was so cold at first, but now he isn't?

I'm glad Lee protected him. He's a bit of a tsundere, too, right?

I wonder what would happen if they figure out just hat happened to Mei?

Keep up the good work! :D I'm sure your sisters loves it!

I like that Jedite got hurt by a gang and the gang's name.

I'm wondering if the people who found him are a gang, too, or just homeless people?

What a great storyline. You captured Jedite's distrust of human compassion well. I look forward to reading more.

Please continue. I like where it’s going and want to see how everything turns out; in the end, there must be a Senshi showdown... and the Shinigami gang must have what’s coming to them.

The summary is very interesting. Great job with writing Jedite's thoughts. Poor Jedite.

You are such a great writer! The first chapter was well-written and super interesting from start to finish! Poor Jedite, hopefully things will eventually look up for him. The chapter title is great, and proves to be completely fitting. There were very funny moments, such as when Jedite kicked the guy in a "sensitive" place and when the dumb kid stabbed him on the wrong side. I loved how you gave Jedite's thoughts on the other Generals, and especially the part about how Zoisite told him they used to be humans but he knew he was just messing with him. It was great how you showed Jedite's hatred for humans, and his thoughts on them such as why Sailor Moon would even bother trying to save them. Jedite was so perfectly in character the entire time. I can't wait to read more of this awesome story!