Oh my god! I love this story so much! Please are there going to be more chapters? Updates please.

Lovely chapter! :)

What a heartbreaking end...I hope they'll be alright. Great job with the chapter!

Great work! Need more.

You write well with proper formatting and dialogue but I’m not captivated because I lack interest in the idea of the story. Though, I implore you to write more but focus on what ideas and suspense would have a reader want to read more. That is unless you’re writing simply for enjoyment,

I feel like all the characterisations are done really well. Dialogue feels natural characters motivations seem really consistent. All in all, very well done.

I know it says complete, but more please?