Reviews for A Tale Of Two Girls
ajnejedi chapter 21 . 7/15
Really enjoyed this story! Joshaya still alive and well in 2020!
Guest chapter 21 . 8/3/2018
This is amazing! By far the best story I’ve read on here.
AlwaysBeenADreamer chapter 21 . 6/18/2018
This story has been a funny and beautiful ride. You have a definite style to your writing which I fell in love with the very first story I read by you. Keeping this one in my favorites. Loved it.
MilesAndMilesToGo chapter 21 . 6/18/2018
Thank you for packing the epilogue with funny and sweet moments. Planning things is great but sometimes life gets in the way of them and I love how you showed that here in funny, cute ways. I laughed a lot reading this and every chapter before, one of my very favorite stories. Great job :)
Kaylee 138 chapter 21 . 6/18/2018
Andrew at the coed baby/wedding shower made me laugh, his gifts,lol. The Rilaya fight about who should get married first seems really funny now because it turned out the opposite. Lucas giving Joshaya a house next door to them was so generous. I love that Rilaya get to be neighbours with their families. Great ending.
xxxxxAmy chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
I think Amy lucked out that her dad won the name battle. Aww, Riley had planned her dream wedding since she was a little girl but ended up getting married at the hospital chapel after just giving birth,lol. Life doesn't always go as planned, I love how cute all four are as married couples and neighbors. This story was funny and the romantic moments were beautiful. Great job.
lovesbooks12 chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
"The groom never had a human face." This cracked me up it was so cute. Poor Riley, all that planning since she was a little girl and neither of the weddings went the way she dreamed. She found out that in the end it didn't matter how they got married. I love that Joshaya and Rucas are neighbours and the ending of this epilogue was so cute with Rilaya on the swing. Loved it.
Ash543 chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
I was surprised to see this in my email, I thought it was finished. I love that you gave us a little future Joshaya and Rucas. Living happily next door to each other, Lucas is amazing for getting Joshaya their house. Super generous and sweet. The last part of the chapter with Rilaya on the swing talking about their daughters becoming best friends was the sweetest ending. Thank you for this story, loved it.
KeepAllMyPromises chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
Aww, poor Josh fainted again. I hope with Riley having her babies first it helped him to prepare for when him and Maya had Amy.
I loved we got to see them 3years later and how happy all their lives turned out. Great ending.
FondOfBooks chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
I love how Josh was used to the girls making plans that involved him and Lucas but never let them help. He knows he would lose that battle. I love that after Rilaya fighting about who should get married first it went the opposite of what they agreed on. Fate decided for them :)
I would definitly be inviting Lucas to my wedding after hearing he gave Joshaya a house for their wedding gift, that was such a generous thing to do. I love Rucas and Joshaya are neighbors and their kids will grow up together. Sweet ending to a story I love. I'm already missing it.
MorganReadsAlot chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
Not only are you are one of the best for updating your stories, you are constantly coming up with new stories. A lot of writers who try putting up more than one story at a time find they can't follow through but you, your amazingly consistent with writing great stories and not leaving them. Thank you, I'm a a big, big, huge FAN of you :)
From the very beginning this story was hilarious and the couples stories were interesting and beautifully done. This one's going to go down as an all time favourite with me. The crazy Rilaya combo shower made me laugh. There had to be a huge difference in the type of gifts Rilaya got,as Andrew proved with his,lol. There were wedding fights, one interrupted wedding and a surprise wedding and they all lived happily ever after. Loved it.
Jen's space chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
Double huckleberries,lol. I'm sad this ones over but you gave it an amazing ending. Maybe Rilaya didn't get those dream weddings they planned but their lives couldn't be any happier. Loved how you ended it with Rilaya sitting on the backyard swing watching the guys put their babies to sleep. That's such a pretty image to end it on. This started as a favourite with me and it's ending on the same note. LOVE IT.
Don'tBringMeDown11 chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
Rilaya arguing about who should get married first was funny since it worked out the opposite of what they planned. Lucas's gift was very generous and I love that their neighbors as well as best friends now. Great story.
Sara999 chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
Worth it? Yeah, it was :) This was so detailed and I love how nothing went the way Rucas or Joshaya planned but they just went with the flow and ended up getting their happily ever after. Love that Josh and Lucas both took the girls back to "their place." The ending with the guys putting the babies down for their nap and Rilaya sitting on the backyard swing talking was really sweet. Great story.
Laugh instead chapter 21 . 6/16/2018
I love how nothing went as planned but everything happened the way it was supposed to for both couples. I think Rilaya should give up planning for things and just let the universe take care of it for them cause it seems to be working for them. You brought back Rucas' elevator, that was my favorite couple moment. I love, love, love that Lucas bought Joshaya a house as a gift so close to theirs and now their neighbours. So many funny moments in this story and killer romantic ones too. Beautiful ending. Loved it.
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