| Reviews for A New Beginning |
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Steelrain66 chapter 11 . 6/19/2019 I am a sucker for Knightshade so this was nice. What can I say I like when the quiet girl with a secret and the honest goofy guy get together. |
lordbeetle0709 chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 Blake and jaune being sisblely is awsome write a story for that one |
SomberFlight chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 I think that first one has the potential to be turned into a series.. |
hirshja chapter 3 . 8/4/2018 This one is kind’ve ridiculous, I’ve gotta say. At the very least, the ending is. Jaune obviously remembers who he really is, otherwise he wouldn’t still be pissed off, that means as soon as he gets to beacon he would tell Ozpin, who would immediately turn around and report that Jacque kidnapped a child. Now atlesians may be okay with his actions against Faunus, but if it came out that he was kidnapping children, then he would be fucked. |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/16/2018 To answer your speculation, Jaune mentions at least twice in canon that he has seven sisters. One of those times is while they're traveling to Minstral. I don't remember the other time. I think it's sometime during the "prom" arc in the first volume. Hope that sheds some light on the subject! |
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 At the very least I’d think that Adam was seriously wounded from that explosion if not dead. Keep in mind how much dust is on that container in the train car. |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/21/2018 i feel so conflicted and cinder naked hilarious i would feel the same |
TobiTheVeryBest chapter 8 . 4/10/2018 Imagine someone trying to hook up with chapter 8 Jaune, in front of his sistersoum help you woman. |
RunMeOvr chapter 8 . 4/10/2018 Chapter 8 is lit I’d like to see more |
zorro99 chapter 8 . 4/8/2018 Jaune having seven sisters is canon. He mentioned it during the dance, and the writers said that he's on the younger end during an AMA. Still, Jaune having his friends as his sisters here is definitely cute. |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 Make the companion Ruby, Blake or Yang |
The Menace Within chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 Like the other reviews I also think he should remember the worlds he visits and at least have the motive/ mission installed since he can't remember the meeting. As for the companion that would eventually find their way to him, kinda want it to be Sun. I think it would be an interesting dynamic between them. Plus with the wording they wouldn't remember the other worlds, just Jaune and that makes sense. |
ZenithTempest chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 If you're set on making this an expanded story, I have to acknowledge one glaring problem: Jaune not remembering the conversation with the Watcher but remembering past lives/other world experiences. This is an issue because you'll have a Jaune 'wake up' one day in a given world with multiple lives worth of memories with no idea why he has them. He'll either think he's insane, others will think he's insane, or dismiss them as nightmares. I think the conversation with the Watcher has to remain so Jaune knows what he is doing and why these past memories exist. |
ShadowIke chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 I vote he remembers every world and he picks Ruby. Sounds like a great story idea. |
Quillion9000 chapter 7 . 3/19/2018 it's an interesting idea. I think Jaune should remember every world and either Ruby or Ren should be his companions. Rwby's experienced even though she's young and Ren usually comes with Norha. He is also skilled in his own right. |