| Reviews for The Key to a New Dawn |
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   Worldmaker chapter 1 . 5/31 My lord, your prose is so purple here you'd stain your other clothing if you put it in the washer... |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 3 . 5/2 I give up cool idea honestly should of just made it MOD Godlike Harry slept with Joyce when he was 15 Finds about her maybe around season 2 of Buffy he's not married I hated that I like my Harry free from hpverse hoes except Luna cause she's awesome I'd love to see Mod Harry traveling with Luna |
| Dracowoman chapter 3 . 7/24/2019 :( |
| mwinter1 chapter 3 . 1/17/2019 Oh come on. Just found this lovely and it only has 2 great chapters and then that third one. Any idea of the next rewrite being posted? Awaiting more. |
| TrashKan chapter 1 . 1/9/2019 Just realised how negative I come off as. The plot line of a baby dawn to complicate things is a good one and there’s some decent writing here, but you need to work on applying characters motivations here. I see Xander and Giles being highly protective whilst Willow would be supportive, but the Watchers would not take this lightly. If I remember correctly the cruciamentum was in season 3, they’d be trying something here for certain. |
| TrashKan chapter 2 . 1/9/2019 Not telling an apprentice Wiccan, a watcher, a werewolf and part time demon hunters about a wizard seems pretty flimsy. |
| donniedarko81 chapter 2 . 10/23/2018 very interesting and I do hope you revamp this story soon as you have mentioned. Also on a side note I am delighted to see some Gaelic (Irish) in a story here. However to get the proper flow of the words you need to use the fada's in the language. To do this simply press at the same time ctrlalt and the letter such as ctrlalta á and the same for the rest of the vowel ú |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2018 great story |
| chase chapter 3 . 9/27/2018 well i hope you figureit out becouse it is a good plot line but also i dont see how you writen your self in a corner |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 good story have you ever thought of pairing harry with connor? |
| LordNemesis chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 Nope not going to refuse why because it was a good story already. |
| lycus chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 If that's what you have to do it's okay especially ones that write quality work but to be honest the first draft of this story was incredable and I hoped that you continue with that version |
| wolfey141 chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 you know if you are rewriting this i would love an actual joyce/harry pairing |
| Neon1311 chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 I'm curious about your next rewrite. Please reconsider your use of RWBY elements, I personally prefered the way Harry fought in your first version. It fit better in the Buffy and Harry Potter universes. |
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 3 . 9/26/2018 I’m actually pretty pumped for the re-write |
