Very nice story.

To guest: pay attention to the story’s rating. If it’s rated M, that means it’s not for kids. Apologize to the author for your mean review

What the hell. I thought this would be a good story for my kids but hell no, now they are asking me questions about what cocks are, and they keep saying ass! I'm reporting. dont ever talk to me, or my son ever again.

Now this was so freaking hot. No words, literally. However, I do have a suggestion. Could you make MORE Alvon stories? These make me feel pretty hot!

First, I'm very happy to see you writing again.
Second, I enjoy how you not only put in their fun at the pool (I love Alvon parkings) but also depicted how their relationship has grown. Even Dave's reaction and eventual acceptance was a nice touch.