you said an instead of a when the first letter of the next word was 't'.

(sorry if i'm picky but i'm a neat freak.
see how i did a not an?

Neville called Diana Diana instead of Natalya. that was a mistake.

*lol* nice reaction to the insult to Lily Tom had, though since this is TEEN Tom who is DECADES too young and has NEVER even met Lily yet unlike his future self, I wonder why would he feel a burst of anger about the insults of a woman he doesn't KNOW yet, and never will thanks to Dumbledore, or even have FEELINGS for yet to care enough.

Though I agree with Tom about the kids attempts to make him upset about the insults to his age. *lol* they do realize that MENTALLY he probably still is the same age he was the day the real Tom created him? Since he hasn't aged in all the years he's been stuck in the diary and has no clue what's been going on outside the diary until recently?

So calling a mentally TEENAGE version of Lord Voldemort old man insults was supposed to do what exactly other than annoy him?

Repost not an update.
Fem character changed to much & in so many ways to every be thought of to have anything to do with harry. Sory but it's tru

So, a few things wrong with these scenes
The biggest issue i have is with the Timestamps you are giving. just giving us the Month and the Day of the Week is useless. are two events in the same week? is one at the beginning of the month, or the end?
Christmas scenes:
First off, very few students stay at Hogwarts for Christmas, if you recall back to Sorcerer's Stone, Harry had to sign up to stay at Hogwarts for the vacation, and there were few enough students that they all sat at one table in the great hall.
Another issue is that the kids being able to dance to Classical music(assuming that by "Classical" you mean European orchestral) is significantly more likely to be true than for more than just a small handful of students not raised in the muggle world to have listened to any muggle genre newer than blues. The majority of purebloods are, or like to present themselves as, English Lords. They have balls, marriage contracts, castles. Also, there's the fact that most purebloods' parents would start a riot if Dumbles exposed their children to the likes of Queen or Micheal Jackson

Are you using google translate for the french? because I'd recommend having a french speaker go over what you've written, certain phrases aren't the same between french and english

Thus has a lot of what I'd call "bad tropes" but I had fun with it. Thanks for the read.

please update soon

Русский твой родной язык?

Loved it

love this whole story! pls continue!️

loving the story so far! please keep updating regularly️

I loved!
They only thing I dislike os raco personality!

Wow, It was big and amazing!

This has turned into a total snorefest now zzzzz