yoir knowledge in rwby is quite lacking I might say...

Sooo, the doctor is smarter than Einstein? (200iq)

As a German reading these names is pretty funny

Hello author , I’m not quite sure either or not the problems that we see in chapter 1 and 2 will persist throughout the series but if it is then maybe you should try using past tense a lot more . It just sounds a lot better . Example : Yang is grinding happily to ruby . Or something along those those lines if you change it to . Ex: Yang was grinning happily towards ruby . It sound much more clean and easier to understand overall .

I would one-hundred percent be willing to be a beta for this. This seems awesome and I hope that it can get back on its feet.

A good argument for Tanya to deny Being X's offer:
'so you made me a problem and are now selling me the solution. Real smooth.'

Hope you continue soon that last bit was a pretty decent cliffhanger be a shame if youe wasted it.

just realized the red vs blue reference

I hope you can update this story soon or remake it to your liking, but don't give up this story is wonderful

Update please it’s nice a and cool story

I created an account to tell you this was amazing, even reading it a second time it kept its novelty. I do hope you come back and update this someday.

Well things just got interesting. So when is Winter is appearing again? It has been a while since she last pop up and I could really use some Winter scenes where she is interacting more with Ruby/Tanya. And it has been a while where Ruby last trained... Loving it though, please update soon!

Kudos!

Will you continue ever?

Nice Visha.

Oh oh more deities . Would shiva approve of his friend’s coercion for worship?

Poor Visha .

Ahah Qrow x ironwood bemoaning about her .

Poor trainees.