This sounds amazing, I hope to read more of this in the future.

The story is looking great so far, but there a couple grammatical errors that need fixing up. I would also spice up the diologue and replace some of those "said"s with other words to give more emotion to the characters, such as "whispered", or "grumbled under his breath". That's pretty much all I'd recommend. Other than that keep up the good work!

I can't wait for an update! I actually started writing something similar, but I've only posted it on Wattpad.

Please keep going I really like where this story is going

Please make more! Scout is God’s Gift to Doki Doki. I just imagine Scout flirting with Yuri XDDD

I'm liking where this is going. As long as it stays as zany and silly as the Team Fortress 2 characters and does not get too romantic/dramatic, it will be marvelous.