Do not let this end in hiatus. Never had I read about such an odd-looking couple, it is almost sweet

Well, out of all the crossovers to happen, I must admit that Portal was the last thing I’d expect. I’ve been following this story off and on for awhile now, and while I had some issues with some things in the first half or so, you’ve clearly put a lot of work into this and care deeply about these characters. Your writing has also improved greatly overtime, and I’m looking forward to future updates!

This story is pretty great. The fluff helps. I hope you continue it and keep up the great work.

Wonder what it is that Revali is keeping so deep that he feels the need to protect or hide from it

I hope there's more episodes that involve Revali drinking because (and I can't believe I'm saying this) I like him better when he's drunk I think drinking helps him forget that stick he has up his butt

P. whole time I thought the shipping names are Link and Mipha was Mink or Minka

Hmm. I find N's further involvement curious and I wonder how or if he can change things.

And the Sheikah outsourced some of the production to Aperture? No WONDER the Guardians were so easy to corrupt and turn against humanity!

I REALLY liked this story and the plot you gave the characters to follow! good luck writing your next chapters

I don't know why but i was oddly satisfied when i read this sooooooooo... Good writing on your part, and this story is great keep it up :)

Another great chapter, as always. The only thing is, I thought potions worked on the Rito, at least? Because there's this Rito at the Kara Kara Bazaar who asks you for a potion... although he never actually ends up using it. And if they didn't work on them, then how did he and another Rito in Gerudo Town get there in the first place? Anyway, I like how you portray the characters here. They're really similar to how I imagined them.

You think your slick don't you? trying to hide Z FROM A POKEMON NEET LIKE ME?

*cough*

yeah i knew it was purrloin just from the description and when you said green mane of hair i knew where this was going instantly

Good job tho! is well written!

I’ve been looking forward to this for so long! I legit squealed when I got notified of this update! I love how Ravioli noticed similarities between him and Zelda, and the Lipha was too good. Needless to say, it was worth the wait.

It’s been awhile! Glad to see you are continuing this adventure. Looking forward to seeing how the next few chapters play out.

I laughed so hard when Urbosa and Revali were just casually talking about the sequel XD

I just have to tell you, I'm so glad I stumbled upon this tonight. The way that you write is breathtaking, seriously. Everything flows just right, I love your style, and I love this story!

Wow, I wanted to thank you for trying to get into the head of Revali. Many Zelda fans give up on him and simply accept he is nothing but a cocky, arrogant jerk. But after many years, I know that Nintendo would never make a character that simplistic. When I first read that this was a Revali x Urbosa story I really doubted it would come to anything, but you have really hit the nail on the head. This is an amazing story and I can’t wait for the next chapter and all the others to come!