| Reviews for Keep Marching On |
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BrokenMentality chapter 9 . 6/17 are you continuing with this? because I'm really enjoying it so far! |
BrokenMentality chapter 8 . 6/17 aw! that dream was so sweet! |
BrokenMentality chapter 7 . 6/17 As someone who still struggles with self-harm, I personally think the way you portrayed it was actually pretty accurate. For me at least, it comes from a place of self-loathing, and I thought it was a plausible and unique take on the effects that the Dark side has had on Ben. Beautiful writing! |
BrokenMentality chapter 6 . 6/17 ooh! interesting take on their visions! |
BrokenMentality chapter 5 . 6/17 aw, sweet moment at the end! |
BrokenMentality chapter 4 . 6/17 CUTE! Love the parallels! |
BrokenMentality chapter 3 . 6/17 This is awesome! I love this! |
marttapuustinen chapter 9 . 10/1/2018 I absolutely love this story! The storyline is interesting and I like your take on the characters. I hope to read more soon!:) |
Guest 3 chapter 9 . 4/25/2018 Hi. I just found this story. I think it’s great and you write the characters very well. I hope you continue this. I would love to read more! :) |
pagan-seijou chapter 9 . 1/29/2018 Hi! I can't wait for an update! Your writing is far from horrible, my dear. I'm a bit of a grammar nazi and have stopped reading fics because excessive poor spelling and grammar hurt my brain. I just binge read all nine chapters and eagerly await the next. Your writing is on point. Seriously, it's really good. Pagan Seijou |
katiewinchester87 chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 I will fight Poe right now if he does anything to Rey |
GraceEliz chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 Well. That was ...well. Talk about a game changer... |
metafizyka chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 It's so good to see Chewie being an important figure here. I love him! Wonder whats going to haloen to Ben tho... How is he going to live now? Where? There's nowhere he can feel safe. Also, Poe is being a douchebag :/ Wonderful chapter, can't wait for next one :) |
megumisakura chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 Awsome chapter! |
CaptainSwan123 chapter 8 . 1/17/2018 Man, go Rey for realizing that he wasn’t ready for that. That’s how you do healthy relationships right there, folks! |