Reviews for Keep Marching On
BrokenMentality chapter 9 . 6/17
are you continuing with this? because I'm really enjoying it so far!
BrokenMentality chapter 8 . 6/17
aw! that dream was so sweet!
BrokenMentality chapter 7 . 6/17
As someone who still struggles with self-harm, I personally think the way you portrayed it was actually pretty accurate. For me at least, it comes from a place of self-loathing, and I thought it was a plausible and unique take on the effects that the Dark side has had on Ben. Beautiful writing!
BrokenMentality chapter 6 . 6/17
ooh! interesting take on their visions!
BrokenMentality chapter 5 . 6/17
aw, sweet moment at the end!
BrokenMentality chapter 4 . 6/17
CUTE! Love the parallels!
BrokenMentality chapter 3 . 6/17
This is awesome! I love this!
marttapuustinen chapter 9 . 10/1/2018
I absolutely love this story! The storyline is interesting and I like your take on the characters. I hope to read more soon!:)
Guest 3 chapter 9 . 4/25/2018
Hi. I just found this story. I think it’s great and you write the characters very well. I hope you continue this. I would love to read more! :)
pagan-seijou chapter 9 . 1/29/2018
Hi! I can't wait for an update! Your writing is far from horrible, my dear. I'm a bit of a grammar nazi and have stopped reading fics because excessive poor spelling and grammar hurt my brain. I just binge read all nine chapters and eagerly await the next. Your writing is on point. Seriously, it's really good.
Pagan Seijou
katiewinchester87 chapter 9 . 1/28/2018
I will fight Poe right now if he does anything to Rey
GraceEliz chapter 9 . 1/28/2018
Well. That was ...well. Talk about a game changer...
metafizyka chapter 9 . 1/28/2018
It's so good to see Chewie being an important figure here. I love him!
Wonder whats going to haloen to Ben tho... How is he going to live now? Where? There's nowhere he can feel safe.
Also, Poe is being a douchebag :/
Wonderful chapter, can't wait for next one :)
megumisakura chapter 1 . 1/27/2018
Awsome chapter!
CaptainSwan123 chapter 8 . 1/17/2018
Man, go Rey for realizing that he wasn’t ready for that. That’s how you do healthy relationships right there, folks!
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