I adore this story! I hope you decide to update soon it is definitely worth it.

Hope Rhaegar doesnt 'kidnap' Lyanna and Elia lives with her children

I love this story keep it up

loving this please continue.

good

I don't think your OC is a Mary Sue, the only thing that seems a bit idealised is Tywin marrying her to Ned before the war. I'd love to know the motivations for that. I continue to love Joella, her family relationships and interaction with the Starks, Ned especially. It's great she has strong relationships with the other houses such as the Tullys and the Martells. I truest hope her dream won't come to pass otherwise it's told us the whole story. It would be tragic if her siblings and father were against her, if Jamie hurt her child. I had thought early on it would be Joella that will be kidnapped. I don't think there's ever been a story where Neds betrothed or wife is the one taken and it would be interesting to see how their children learning about the war. Great chapter, look forward to the next one.

Glad you didn't give up on this story, and has become the Lioness in the North. Before long, the tourney of Harrenhal will happen, and it will be the first step to the rebellion.

I’m so happy they finally married

Really awesome chapter, didnt think you would update but this was a plesasent suprise. Yes she is a bit of a mary-sue at the moment but i feel like that can change and she can become more of a real life character ad she deals with different situations. I think the key would be for her to not get everything she wanted /personal tradegdy to help her grow. For example even though she has promised he father that she would have many children she could still be pertifed of the process due to her mother and that the father would take the child if she dies. While she does appear to have recieved a lot of things from tywin, i would play up what she said to lyanna of how she didnt get those things due to her fathers love but due to sacificing other things she loved, eg she could either learn the sword or the harp (something her mother wanted maybe) or it was only to add skills which made her a more valuable broodmare to sell for an alliance. Overall id say that if you emphasise she has been more lucky to get the things she wanted but used a ton lf hard work to take advantage of it. You could do this in a future chapter where she advises lyanna or something. Thats the only way to get her out of the mary sue definiton. Overall though the plot is getting a good set up. She has a good group of allies right now- would be interesting to see how cannon event chage due to the oc. Generally looking forward to what you come up with

I loved it and cant wait to see what will come next keep up the good work.

I love them so much all my joy and love for the two... Ned... you better be honest with this girl when you bring Jon home, if nothing else you know she would love that boy like her own.

This was too cute.

yay! they are married. tywin is wrong because Joella will follow her through depths of hell to protect him.

People are saying a lot of nasty things about your story but I like it so far I hope you update soon I’m sorry about all the negative reviews you’re getting it is a bit Mary Sue Ill admit that. But that doesn’t make it a bad story it’s actually very good story and I’m enjoying it quite a bit and I’ve missed your updates please update soon.

Please, like you'll actually let her married Eddard Stark..You're going canon and that STARK WHORE is just that.