I'm really loving your fanfic! I hope you write more about this couple!

So Hit is back from the dead. Please tell me you're working on this again or I'll be sad ;_;

Me ha quedado un sabor agridulce despues de leer , pero es hermoso!

Gracias por escribirlo!

Lovely ending :"), Gosh I want to cry lol. Nice post notes scene haha, I was wondering where was the scene that you teased on last chapter haha. More than amazing job, keep it up!

I really loved it thank you for taking your time to actually write this. :)
Also i hope you get better soon.

Awesome. This was so sweet,yet bitter at the same time. You really are a great author for writting such a great story. Have a nice day

Ok, primero que nada que gran historia y sí, a pesar de que entiendo muy bien el inglés, coment en español desde que leí que eras venezolano(a) ya que de hecho soy venezolana también y me enorgullece encontrar no un latino solamente sino uno de mi país que maneje lo suficientemente bien el inglés para llevar esta novela a otras audiencias, eso y que la mayoría de escritores latinos que sigo en este mundo del fanfiction suelen ser en su mayoría mexicanos, chilenos y algunos argentinos pero hasta ahora no me había encontrado con alguien de mi propio país, espero continúes porque la tensión y el drama está muy bueno para abandonarlo y la pareja de Vados y Hit me encanta a pesar de que Hit es mortal y Vados un ángel porque siento que sus personalidades "frías" y "distantes" son en verdad muy compatibles, incluso más que el Vados x Champa

"Why? You said you, as an angel, would live even though the universe were erased"

Thanks to Frost, in my fanfic, Vados was erased along with Universe 6.

Very interesting, I've always thought that Vaods might be trying to seduce Hit (Good luck with him being an over 1000-year-old assassin).

I'm crying already :"(. Good chapter! Is the content that matters not the size haha, I mean it, good job here. Also, glad to know you're from Latam. Greetings from Paraguay!

keep it third person please.

Awww man. It sucks so much that this story is gonna end. Nonethless,i will make sure to look at it till the end. As a sugestion,have Grand Priest explain to the Zeno Kings when they ask what is Vados doing and have both Zeno spare Hit because of thinking that he is cool. Have a nice day

Decent chapter.

I still think you should keep it third person.

I look forward to the final.

Mierda! He llorado con esto.!

Y tus ultimas lineas me dan misterio

dai es padre si , pero no creo que tenga que quitarle a sus hijos la oportunidad de despedirse de quienes aman. vados y hit. sour y helles ( tambien me ha empezado a gustar esta pareja) y marcarita y vermut. wiss le dira algo a su padre?

Feliz día del amor : me la ha pasado comprando libros, mis primeros amores!

Well well another great chapter! It reminded me of when he was eliminated, since that, my hate towards Jiren grew up so much lol.
Thank you for keep writing, good luck with your studies!

She got yelled at just sitting next to him, whent he elimination comes and herself after I'm going to expect a bit of a change In personality.